Reviews for The Tapping Noise Of Temptation
Guest chapter 5 . 11/1/2012
yes please (for the chelsie thing) please please please!
sky chapter 5 . 3/16/2012
This was really great!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/3/2012
Actually crying...

Why can't they be together?
Mrs Danvers chapter 5 . 1/27/2012
That was unbearably sad. I've said it before, but I think that the Robert/Jane relationship was a lot deeper and a lot more complex than Julian Fellowes allowed it to be, and I believe they were well on the way to being thoroughly in love with each other.I like also the way you pick up on a point that a lot of people seem to miss - that Robert gives his consent to Sybil and Branson after Jane has left. It's as if he recognises that it is possible to love and want someone who isn't your class, and that even if he can't be happy they can.
Mrs Danvers chapter 4 . 1/22/2012
I adore Robert and this shouldn't have made me laugh, but it did. The poor man - all he wants is a bit of slap and tickle and now he's going to have to deal with Anna, Mrs Hughes AND Sybil. How can you be so HORRIBLE to him? perhaps fire will break out and he'll be saved.

More please, and quickly. This is fantastic.
Rory Butcher chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
Cliffhangers are the bane of all readers! ;) This could go either way; so how do u want us to feel? :D keep up the good work :)
Guest chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
idk why, but this is havin me in hysterics...probably still haven't matured enough yet to not laugh everytime xD im sure, as always, that quality of language is amazing and :D but i just can't stop laughing...bear with me a few secs...can't write this review...ok ok. im fine now. Well, really well written and I'm glad Mrs H does have a sense of humour somewhere...

across-the-sun chapter 3 . 1/6/2012
It's up to you what the turn-out of the next chapter will be. But then again, maybe a surprise will draw more readers in. (no bitchiness intended) thank you for updating! I love the way you write this pairing! :D
Rory Butcher chapter 3 . 1/5/2012
Really nicely written. Plenty of plot and a good description. Keep 'em comin'! :D Absolutely someone i know...:P
mts3479 chapter 3 . 1/4/2012
Loved your character sketch of our two protagonists & loved the way you captured the contrast of lust & guilt. I hope the next chapter will be what I was thinking.

It was also good the way you slotted "Chelsie" in - it was neat & not at all contrived.

Well done!
emmiswe chapter 3 . 1/4/2012
Please! Let it be what we expect ;) Oh, my! And here the screenwriters thought Mary was the lusty one. But here's everyone's just filled with it. And I love it! There's such an energy in your writing. Great work!
Mrs Danvers chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
More please! I love the Robert/Jane pairing, and you've portrayed very well the longing and guilt.
Schmee Duck chapter 2 . 12/20/2011


Much love for Anna - What a babe!
Rory Butcher chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
Really good! :D Keep up the good work! :D
emmiswe chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
This was great! I must know how it continues. Please, write a chapter 3 :)
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