Reviews for This time we do it right
thonez chapter 16 . 4/30
great story
Illuviar chapter 16 . 4/19
Good story, though you need to run it through spell check.
Illuviar chapter 1 . 4/18
Very interesting start!
Gleas chapter 11 . 3/11
A Gryffinodor... definitely one... that kid knows no fear lol
MartinDeShade chapter 5 . 2/28
I got through about half way through the fifth chapter before I had to put it down. The constant misspellings or miss-wordings have made this story unreadable. It's nice story ruined by bad editing.
Qinetiq chapter 2 . 2/24
Good God, no. Just... no.
juan chapter 8 . 2/12
what a coward draco is just like his future husband or is it futre wife tom since everyone knows gays sissys acting like girls
juan chapter 16 . 1/31
good thing ginny in my stories will always be with harry with hermione being the third unlike other idiots who use the idiot myth that she use love potion
whitebuffalowmn chapter 16 . 1/21
good story! hope you go on to give Dumbles and Snape a trial.
whitebuffalowmn chapter 15 . 1/21
LOL I liked the first version better! good chapter!
Adharsh chapter 16 . 1/9
Good story.
The idea of time travel was portrayed good.
I felt that the story was rushed at the end.
Waiting for the epilogue.
jon reeve chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
I think you're looking for phial or vial, not vile.
akasanta chapter 16 . 9/15/2014
Excellent story! Thanks for writing it.


akasanta chapter 15 . 9/15/2014
You're right. The scene you used for the second task fit a lot better.

Egbert1963 chapter 16 . 8/30/2014
Leuk verhaal. Enige minpunt is het feit dat je spel checker sommige woorden vernagelde, maar buiten dat was het een goed verhaal.
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