|Reviews for This time we do it right|
| Illuviar chapter 16 . 4/19
Good story, though you need to run it through spell check.
| Illuviar chapter 1 . 4/18
Very interesting start!
| Gleas chapter 11 . 3/11
A Gryffinodor... definitely one... that kid knows no fear lol
| MartinDeShade chapter 5 . 2/28
I got through about half way through the fifth chapter before I had to put it down. The constant misspellings or miss-wordings have made this story unreadable. It's nice story ruined by bad editing.
| Qinetiq chapter 2 . 2/24
Good God, no. Just... no.
| juan chapter 8 . 2/12
what a coward draco is just like his future husband or is it futre wife tom since everyone knows gays sissys acting like girls
| juan chapter 16 . 1/31
good thing ginny in my stories will always be with harry with hermione being the third unlike other idiots who use the idiot myth that she use love potion
| whitebuffalowmn chapter 16 . 1/21
good story! hope you go on to give Dumbles and Snape a trial.
| whitebuffalowmn chapter 15 . 1/21
LOL I liked the first version better! good chapter!
| Adharsh chapter 16 . 1/9
The idea of time travel was portrayed good.
I felt that the story was rushed at the end.
Waiting for the epilogue.
| jon reeve chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
I think you're looking for phial or vial, not vile.
| akasanta chapter 16 . 9/15/2014
Excellent story! Thanks for writing it.
| akasanta chapter 15 . 9/15/2014
You're right. The scene you used for the second task fit a lot better.
| Egbert1963 chapter 16 . 8/30/2014
Leuk verhaal. Enige minpunt is het feit dat je spel checker sommige woorden vernagelde, maar buiten dat was het een goed verhaal.
| graceandpipp chapter 4 . 8/5/2014
This is a very good story so far I enjoy how it is developing I only have one comment to make in the negative did you have a beta for this story, cause I am finding many mistakes with misspelled words and words that are missing for the sentences to make sense in places?