|Reviews for His Girl|
| Rayray0528 chapter 28 . 11/8/2016
| Rayray0528 chapter 27 . 11/7/2016
I LOVE your story, but could you please try to cuss less? I'm not supposed to be reading any swearing but I can't help it. It's so addicting!
| Rayray0528 chapter 15 . 11/6/2016
Soda and Makenzie shouldn't of taken a break! And why wouldn't she tell him anything?! I get to upset about fictional stories.
| Rayray0528 chapter 4 . 11/5/2016
Hahahahahhahahahahahaha!the sound I made was NOT human
| Thewritevocie chapter 48 . 5/19/2016
To fucking cute
| lol199 chapter 48 . 10/11/2015
absolutely loved this story! thankyou so much!
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/8/2015
Obviously "him" is Billy.
| saiyan angel blue chapter 48 . 2/15/2015
its 1.30am I had to stay up and read this is was bloody good I hope you write more
| acsanny chapter 48 . 1/25/2015
Thanks for the story. It's great!
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/27/2014
| Kayla chapter 48 . 10/16/2014
Oh my gosh... This was the only fanfiction that ever made me cry... It was so beautiful!
| Guest chapter 48 . 7/25/2014
OHMYGOODNESS okay so I just finished this story and awwwwwwwwww I think you did really great. I love the character you created, she's very complex and very real. Also, I feel like you kept everyone else from the outsiders in character, which can be a hard thing to do but works so well in this story. It's a super super sweet story. I love it all!
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/2/2013
Hey today is Mackenzie's birthday
| johnnysgirl16 chapter 30 . 7/23/2013
"They'd be proud of you, superman," I whispered.
That quote made me start crying! Like body shaking, tears flowing, ugly cry! Amazing!
| Guest chapter 36 . 6/24/2013
This totally rocked