Reviews for Our Broken Road
KimiD chapter 30 . 8/9/2015
that was funny Esme walking in on them... and he wrote their story, too sweet~
KimiD chapter 25 . 8/9/2015
Well it seems Edward may have finally gotten him head out of the sand, but to what~ have her tell him he is too late... talk about a rock and a hard place... so many variables... my mind is twisted up in her head and wondering where Her head is ~
KimiD chapter 24 . 8/9/2015
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr~!
KimiD chapter 22 . 8/9/2015
Oh they were definitely having a pissing contest... Edward needs to man up and tell Bells how he feels... it was all okay as long as she was not seriously dating anyone~ it was always on the back burner, Bella was always There. But with this new development of her seeing jake, now, there's possibility of Losing her altogher...
KimiD chapter 21 . 8/9/2015
I understand it is part and parcel of the story but really I do not like reading the lemons on jake and her so I skip over those parts... it just seems wrong...
KimiD chapter 18 . 8/9/2015
BAby Steps~ Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
KimiD chapter 17 . 8/9/2015
Yeah, I kinda wondered when She would be introduced to the mix...
Oh Alice~
KimiD chapter 16 . 8/9/2015
What a Mess~!
KimiD chapter 14 . 8/9/2015
That was soo so Em~!
I do not think Edward was all that drunk and she sobered quite quickly~ hard to tell where his mind lies with Bells, he seems to have wanted to be her first, and was a bit surprised at her confession about him in high school, pleased even but he's holding his cards close to his chest and not letting anything out as to what or how he is feeling after being with her... she, she is even more in love with him as it exceeded all her dreams and fantasies... where to go from here...
KimiD chapter 13 . 8/9/2015
This is my favorite chapter so far too...
KimiD chapter 7 . 8/9/2015
Thank goodness, so many times when Charlie gets shot in these stories they always make it where he dies, it is refreshing to have a live and kicking Charlie...
I am wondering though if this has maybe opened Edward's eyes about Bella, got him to thinking about ~ more. He said he'd been thinking about her too...
Jaygm chapter 37 . 6/15/2015
I was literally losing it as these two were constantly dancing around each other but never could get it together. It seemed interminable. But they eventually figured it out and we got several chapter of them together with a bright future in front of them. Loved the characters. Jacob was actually a decent guy, I just don't like seeing him with Bella. Thank you so much for this story.
Jaygm chapter 36 . 6/15/2015
That would be very upsetting, however, he acts as though it isn't something he is going to tell her about eventually.
Jaygm chapter 35 . 6/15/2015
Nice to know that he plans on going wherever she goes!
Jaygm chapter 34 . 6/15/2015
Wild and crazy!
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