Reviews for The Dark Side
KaterinaRose chapter 16 . 10/23/2013
Programmer,I could've sworn I deleted this story due to making full changes in it,but oh well. I haven't uploaded in a long time cause I'm way to busy. I appreciate your help and I have been editing it on my laptop for so long. I'm probably going to take it down cause I don't have time for it anymore
The-Programmer chapter 8 . 10/23/2013
Da-vid: *Comes back into the room, sits down, reads, and starts mumbling incoherently*
Me: "You okay?"
Da-vid: "Is this really K?"

Now Since you have 16 chapters up so far, and this is 8 its time for: THE GOOD, THE BAD, THE UGLY! *cue firworks*

THE GOOD: Nice grammatical skills, great plot, and an addictive read overall.

THE BAD: It moves a bit quickly, and would like more detail in some areas.

THE UGLY: Pretty much Da-vid.
The-Programmer chapter 7 . 10/23/2013
Antonio's parents seem very relaxed about all this. I guess I'll find out next chapter.
The-Programmer chapter 6 . 10/23/2013
The plot twists... I can't believe I'm actually hooked on your story. Too bad Da-vid left the room for this chapter.
The-Programmer chapter 5 . 10/23/2013
*Da-vid comes back and chuckles when he reads 'Kyrie'*
Me: "Didn't you just get into trouble?"
*Da-vid turns back and starts working on his essay*

Yeah I would fix up the rating, but everything else so far is great!
The-Programmer chapter 4 . 10/23/2013
Da-vid: "No comment. Such mature content for a child" T_T
Me: "David it's her story, shut up and read." .-.
Da-vid: *Gets in trouble for talking during class*
Me: "Yeah, Da-vid." *sticks tongue out and continues reading alone*
The-Programmer chapter 3 . 10/23/2013
Da-vid:"That's so cool! Luis is a Vampire! :3"
Me: "Ehh, it's a good story."
The-Programmer chapter 2 . 10/23/2013
I would fix the rating to T, but so far good work.
The-Programmer chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Interesting, very interesting.
Guest chapter 16 . 6/15/2013
Poor girl, she is really goin through it. Glad u found time to post
AlexandraSterling41 chapter 15 . 3/4/2013
please update soon i got to know what happens next, and so happy its a girl
lisa chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Oh and great writing!
lisa chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
I like ur story!
Califor3va chapter 14 . 1/31/2013
Wow intense, I love it
AlexandraSterling41 chapter 14 . 1/31/2013
omg please update soon
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