|Reviews for My Immortal|
| Hoobafoo chapter 16 . 7/10/2014
Guess who is being naughty, Chloe-clue and made a secret ff account once more! And guess who is UPSET THAT U HAVE NOT UPDATED THIS STORY SINCE 2012 and would be happy to edit your stories once more. To be honest I think this needs a bit of a re-write though, your writing has improved so much over the past two years!
| b00kw0rms chapter 16 . 7/19/2013
Yay! This is so good! I love it and hope you update again! Fantastic job and live the pairing!
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/17/2012
Hey I just read ur chap 15 and I lik the chap
Btw I'm the guest that put best wishes after it I fanilly got a acount so here I am
| IsobelFrances chapter 15 . 8/20/2012
Just found this story and I think that it's epic please update soon!
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/28/2012
Omg I LOVE this story it as a unick twist and I I like it but I wonder when u r going to make them find out I would make lucy find out then she tells the other but is ur story so do what u want :)
Also r the others realy dead? I hope not sence shhe didn't realy find out maybe make peter(her uncle not the king :P) again ur story hope 4 thhe best
| Tashi and the Black Bumble Bee chapter 14 . 6/13/2012
Hey! Sorry for not being able to PM, I'm back at mums... (no internet). Anyway, even though I've already read it, great chapter! I loved the relationship between Meredith and Claire, and the way you described life on Earth perfectly. The kitchen scene was very nice too, that awkwardness of meeting a new friend was good. I don't know HOW you come up with these awesome names... however, instead of using capitals, (use them when the dialogue is shouting) use italics when you want to emphasise something. Edmund was really funny... though I'm just biased. Once again, brilliant writing! PM me back, and more parts of the next chapter, and I'll try to get the internet connection of my hogger of a sister...
| Tashi and the Black Bumble Bee chapter 13 . 5/8/2012
Hey Rosie! I'm blushing (meaning:crying) but I just say stuff and stuff! You do all the work! Anyways, I'm too short to be an inspiration!
I noticed a mistake, when Susan is talking to Claire, you say 'I thought her heard me' instead of he, and shouldn't High King always be in capitals?
Yes, you are very right in that you owe us more writing stuff. You do. Because I do not have anything good to read. And this is good. But you don't update. I know, for your birthday, I will find out where you live and get my llama minions to build a super-fast magical sunshine rainbows keyboard for your computer. Because it is made of sunshine and rainbows, I will understand if you throw it out the window, but it was Marmaduke the llama minion's idea.
I love the way you portrayed Keren and Ariana's character! They piss me off! Great job! Just wanted to say goodnight. Great chapter, and I will be expecting those oneshots soon!
Bee xxxooxox (\_/)
(0.-) Evil winking bunny!
| Tashi and the Black Bumble Bee chapter 12 . 4/27/2012
Alright, I have decided that I don't care that your computer was attacked by mutant water Rosie, where is an update!
SEE HOW UPSET I AM? I USED MORE THAN THE NECESSARY APOSTROPHES! I AM THE GRAMMAR SPAZ AND I AM IN A RAGE!
Oh, BTW, good work, I like it, though poor Edmund should get a girlfriend.
BTB, I started the prayer journal :). Favourite-ing this!
| Minora chapter 12 . 4/11/2012
Bwahahahahahahahaha... *cough violently* Sorry there having a moment.
I wonder what will occur at the ball. The ball has been hinted at for a while, so I am interested as to what will happen.
"If your story was a toothbrush, it would be an electric toothbrush"
I know odd right? I just couldn't help myself. I have another account, and someone once sent that in a review. It was years ago, but I still remember it clearly, so I just felt tempted to send it to someone else. Hence the quotations... no I am not a grammar freak... only when I'm in a pysco mood or so I'm told.
Anyway Great story. I hope to read more soon... *pout* please~
| Minora chapter 11 . 4/11/2012
| Minora chapter 10 . 4/11/2012
Reunited at last... Kinda.
What do you like the most so far?
I definetely like the set up and the personalities of the characters. And the obvious-the uniqueness. (I love being kept on my toes. I get bored with predictable stories, but I love this.) It's also nice and flowy.
What do you dislike the most so far?
Hmm... tough to answer... what don't I like... what don't I like...I dunno.
If you could choose one thing to happen, what would it be?
Hmm... it's nice and vast your ideas so far. Maybe a bit of unintentional jealousy? I actually think you are doing a good job incorporating all your different ideas. I say keep working at the pace you are now.
Which character is the most fun to read about?
Defenitely Claire and Peter no doubt.
Then after them, I would say Lucy and Edmund in their comic relief moments.
Which character is the least fun to read about?
I would say Susan, but that's because there aren't many scenes with her(unless she is with everyone else). Also Meredith I guess... I love her, but she only interacts with the same two people for the most part. It's understandable but there are so many possibilities.
| Minora chapter 9 . 4/11/2012
Peter is so adorable in this chapter.
At times I just want to hug and tease him.
And other times I feel bad for him.
You'll be okay, man.
| Minora chapter 8 . 4/11/2012
Aw~ Touching moments~ Really... I can't believe I didn't find this story sooner. This is soo good. :D
| Minora chapter 7 . 4/11/2012
eeeeeee! Aw~ Peter is going to go after her... *snicker*...
and Meredith is here! Tee hee *evil plotting* Fire time!
| Minora chapter 6 . 4/11/2012
Suck it up Edmund; it's just a crab...
...but crabs are scary and can really hurt... still better you than me.