|Reviews for The Greatest Man I Never Knew|
| jay7795 chapter 2 . 8/19
OMG! You stabbed me thru the heart with this story… I was a sobbing mess and the crazy thing is it was only 2 chapters. But it was amazingly written. Great story!
Thank you for sharing your skills
| sliver.v.smith chapter 2 . 6/29
| sliver.v.smith chapter 1 . 6/29
Well shit I just started crying...
| Mitzi1958 chapter 4 . 6/15
A beautiful story that I just got alerted too by the Mafiaward club! It is short, sweet and so damn sad. However I think you deal with some truth in this story that so many other Mafia stories do not, your Edward was killed, theirs always seem to come out of whatever or however bad it gets and that is not real life. If you are in this kind of world, love a man in the Mon world there is a chance and sometime much better than 50/50 that they are not coming home. While I felt for Bella, he did give her two babies who looked like him, talked like him and acted like him so he she was never, really alone. My tears went to his children who of course never mind them not remembering their father would miss him just as much as Bella, ESP., Elizabeth because their is so many things at school that are for daddy/daughter events. The only thing I would have fixed in your story is I would of had Carlisle, Jasper or Emmett going to these events with Elizabeth. They are not her daddy but they are her grandfather and uncles who love her just as much and maybe she would not have felt so alone.
Bella wanting to pack up her grief, leaving it only for herself and than realizing what harm it did to her children had me crying all over again! She realized the damage she did, not being mean about it but in giving them pieces of stuff that was their father's she gave them both a piece of him that they will cherish and maybe pass on to the children they will have.
One more request, could you, would you please write one more chapter of Bella dieting and meeting Edward in the hereafter, so they are back together. Yes Edward did a whole lot of bad things but loving Bella and seeing what life is all about may forgive a lot of the sins we do in our life. How can someone be so bad but fall in love so passionately with a woman without Devine intervention. He did not do as his grandfather said and someone up there who loved him sent him Bella for he could feel the goodness in life. So that is my one request. Thank you for a real life Mob story.
| Azlady2003 chapter 2 . 6/14
I balled, I'm talking snot and coughing balled. I wish there was a future take where Bella is dead ans is reunited with edward.
| StelenaClaceLover09 chapter 2 . 6/13
i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love Bella & Edward together
| snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 6/13
Wonderful... but tears
| Rita01tx chapter 2 . 1/11
Love it, love it, love it *sniff!*
| Rita01tx chapter 1 . 1/11
Start with the short one, I told myself after seein' you coach Jackie Sue how to read MGEMP and MBEB! Little did I know you were gonna gut me by the end of the first chapter *snotsob!*
| cullen0118 chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
I loved the story even though it made me use the whole box of tissues...;)
| SelenaQuintanillaLOVER chapter 4 . 10/26/2012
This is a sad story but I'm happy that Bella had found peace and EJ and Eli has gotten to be more connected to their father, words can't express how I feel to a T
| alii101 chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
I hve never cried so much in my life. Pls tell me tht thins gonna happen in ur other storys!:(
| FLOW LIZ chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
Love it. I cried like a baby.
| FLOW LIZ chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
So sad. I love this story.
| Jess chapter 4 . 1/27/2012
Great story crying myeyes out but great story