|Reviews for The Way I notice you|
| The Demoness6 chapter 3 . 12/8/2012
| The Demoness6 chapter 2 . 12/8/2012
Gertrude is not a stalker! She just is scared to talk to Horton even though she likes him!
| The Demoness6 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Awwwww so cute! And I find it very smart of you to not put a disclaimer because dr suess is dead so no one can be him anyway.
I hope I get to be Gertrude in the musical!
| Scarstorm2000 chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
Wow... I never thought that I would read someting like this, I had my doubts, but this is actully pretty good :) I enjoyed reading this. Great Job. But update soon!
Until Next Time
Your Devoted Reader,
| Gryffindizzledor chapter 3 . 6/19/2012
You should continue this!
(you probably know this) But in the story Horton is captured as a part of the circus and Mayzie find him in Palm beach and gives him her egg for good. So that might help if you want to write more. PLEASE do, it was really good.
| Arixa23 chapter 3 . 5/30/2012
This is a very sweet AU version of Seussical, I like it so far! I'm curious to see whether you're going to incorporate Jojo and/or the characters from the other subplots (like the Cat or the Sour Kangaroo, for example) at one point.
| Lauryll chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
This is a very, so far, bitter-sweet and based-off-the-musical kind of story. Except that JoJo and Horton are brothers. That's a little freaky. And that Horton is POPULAR. That's also a little freaky! And Gertrude doesn't really kind of swear a lot...though she does hate Mayzie to pieces! I'll be sure to subscribe!
| disneydork29175 chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
First things first. It's Horton. Not Hortan. Sorry, that just REALLY bothers me.
Hello TheStreetsOfParisEponine! I'm Em Cabot
Cat: Geez, ya couldn't have picked a longer name, could you?
Me: *shoves him out of the review* Go bother JoJo!
Me: ... good, he's gone. It's nice to meet you! I'd like you to meet my Gertrude!
Gertrude: *is shoved in* Oh... hi! *waves awkwardly*
Me: You read her story, right?
Gertrude: ... you forced me to...
Me: So... you did?
Gertrude: Yes... Yes I did.
Gertrude: ... What?
Me: What did you think?
Me: Well, lets start small. What's something you noticed?
Me: Lovely. Gertrude, speak up! Come on! She called Horton, "Hortan"
Horton: ... seriously?
Gertrude: ... Yeeah...
Me: Well, a-at least you're still madly in love with him!
Gertrude: ... I called Mayzie a... that word? I'd never call anyone that! I mean, she's a little pushy sometimes... but I'd never...
Cat: *reads the rest of the story* *bursts out laughing* He... Singer... Popular... *laughs harder*
Horton: *sarcastically* Thanks Cat. REALLY appreciate it.
Cat: *still laughing* No problem. No, no. But seriously. You'd be down with Gertrude in popularity. Even I'D be higher than you... and I'm insane!
Me: No truer words have ever been spoken...
Gertrude and Horton: HEY!
Me: About the Cat being insane! But lets face it. If you weren't popular in the Jungle of Nool, you won't be popular in high school. Believe me, I'd know.
Gertrude: Well... do you know where the story is going?
Me: No... if I did, I'd be writing the story. But it will be interesting to see where this is going.
Cat: So... even though you don't paticurally care for it, you're still going to read it.
Me: ... there's nothing else to read!
Cat: How bout you try UPDATING!
Me: *sigh* FINE!
Honestly, those characters. No respect.
Anyway, I can't wait to see where this story goes... and honestly I'm a little scared. The characterizations are a bit... iffy. I mean, I don't really know about Horton being the most popular guy in school... he's an elephant. And kinda quiet in the play. He doesn't strike me as the type to be popular... or a leader.
Me: Oh come of it. You know it's true.
Horton: Well... I guess... but still!
Me: *eyeroll* Sorry... but just because you're not popular doesn't mean you don't have a heart of gold! In fact, most popular people DON'T have a heart of gold! Believe me, I know...
But back to the actual substance of the review. I'm really not trying to offend you in any way. The idea is pretty cool actually. There's nothing like it on here. I just think that you need to improve your characterizations. I'm looking forward to seeing more!
Peace, Love, and Seuss forever!
Em Cabot, and my crazy characters ;P
P.S. Sorry for a majorily long review, I tend to leave really long reviews.
P.S.S. I'm also sorry for the Cat... I swear, he has no respect for people. Have a good day!
| TheCatsApprentice19 chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Yah! Another story in the Seussical section! Now, about the story, it is really quite good. The only thing I would have to say is that Horton is spelt Horton,not Hortan. But other than that and a few other little things, great job!
P.S If you eva need ideas or stuff like that to do with Seussical, I'm your girl. ;)