|Reviews for Ha'iole Ka Mea 'Oko'a|
| Sarai chapter 7 . 8/9/2016
I like this version the best.
| Long Live BRUCAS chapter 7 . 4/29/2015
Better than the show
| IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 7 . 6/20/2014
Awww, so sweet! I love it!
| gymkidz2000 chapter 7 . 11/29/2011
Now that I finally finished...
This was awesome. You did a great job combining the two worlds.
Mahalo for sharing. Can't wait for more stories.
| AZGirl chapter 7 . 11/29/2011
Enjoyed reading this and hope you do more in this AU!
| francis2 chapter 7 . 11/29/2011
This was a great ending even when the talk at the grave seems a bit sappy.
| francis2 chapter 6 . 11/29/2011
Yeeehaawww! Great takedown!
| Qweb chapter 7 . 11/28/2011
Loved the story. Can't wait for the next one.
| Qweb chapter 5 . 11/28/2011
Awesome. I would live to see Wo Fat trapped and humbled.
| francis2 chapter 5 . 11/28/2011
| crokettsgirl chapter 5 . 11/28/2011
I need to ask this cause I missed it somewhere. Who was the third person in the room that walked out with Steve and Danny leaving Wo Fat in the room? And at the end who were the 5 people walking away with a smile on their faces to get kono back?
I thought this was so good. Love how Danny and Steve finished each other's thoughts and went through the story of how they knew and that Wo Fat had actually fallen into Steve's plan. I loved it. sue
| crokettsgirl chapter 4 . 11/28/2011
Fantastic! Love how Steve made sure Stan and Grace were safe but no mention of Rachel..lol...I like how they put on the show to lull Wo fat into thinking they were doing something else and surprised him in Hesse's cell...great job. sue
| sherry57 chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
I most certainly enjolyed two chapters in one day and I am no looking forward to the next one. Thanks hon.
| Qweb chapter 4 . 11/27/2011
Your team's smarter than Lenkov's team, that's for sure. But i love them either way.
I'd really love to see the guys get one step ahead of Wo Fat for a change. Thanks.
| crokettsgirl chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
I like how both chin and Kono think about their team, Steve and all the things they have done together to find out more about Wo Fat. I like the way you wrote their thoughts down. I also like the picture of Kono on the surf board like she was in the first episode to season two...great job. sue