Reviews for Cinder's Story
Random Fangirl chapter 27 . 9/23/2016
I absolutley LOVED this story! The grammer was perfect and was very descriptive. I also LOVED the ending. I started to BAWL my eyes out. Amazing job!
Guest chapter 20 . 6/13/2016
You changed the princes birthday from October 10th to June 21. Just thought you would like to now.
Aibo-chan chapter 27 . 12/18/2015
I loved this story so much! I felt guilty for feeling a tad bit bad for Desmond but then who knows maybe the Tremaines could have hired a new housekeeper and he fell for him instead XD. All in all this story was well-written and heartwarming. Nice job!
ShinighStar chapter 27 . 12/7/2015
I just finished reading ypur Story. Thanks for writing it and sharing with all of us.
I loved it, it was a Cinderella story and somehow it wasnt, but it was great.
AnnoyingJacob chapter 10 . 11/17/2015
This is very sad and shows how violent someone you thought you trusted can disobey you. Otherwise rape, I neither like it nor hate it and it scars me but leaves a valuable lesson.(It took a lot of courage to come back here.):
Theodore chapter 27 . 11/15/2015
The rape part was, no too much. Te rest was beautifully written and I loved it.
Guest chapter 27 . 10/27/2015
That was amazing! I'm so glad I finished it even though I stayed up until 2 doing it. It was cute, sad, sweet and happy all mixed together. Thanks for the amazing story
Alien chapter 27 . 7/7/2015
Awww the ending was so beautiful and sadness but AMAZING I..I..I can't even begin to the describe how wonderful the whole thing was..but what I don't understand is why the fairy godmother didn't make Ceceil kids STILL a great story that Disney should consider .')
Aliens chapter 25 . 7/7/2015
Alien chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
It was ok I guess
Crazy Hetalia chapter 27 . 6/23/2015
I cane across this story at 1 am hoping to read just some silly retold Cinderella story, but between males. I never expected any of this, and I have to admit, that last chapter really tugged at my heart strings. Your writing was wonderful (save for a few spelling mistakes that can be easily looked over), and the characters themselves were well represented. I really enjoyed your story, thank you for writing such a wonderful thing!
05xRi-chanx27 chapter 27 . 3/29/2015
Well, that kinda hit the feels *sniff*
But, beautiful story, loved it (I remember not even wanting to sleep cuz' I wanted to read more V)
Thanks for the story! And also for completing it! You just gotta appreciate those
Angelicia chapter 26 . 12/2/2014
I was actually shipping Desmond and Cinder at first but then Desmond raped Cinder and I was just like god dammit Desmond! I like the way it ended but I would like to see what it would have been like if Cinder chose Desmond. :)
Ivy2121 chapter 27 . 6/19/2014
That was just a perfectly beautiful story with a side dish of tragedy.
Ivy2121 chapter 9 . 6/18/2014
This is great and there are no grammar mistakes as far as I could see.
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