|Reviews for Cinder's Story|
| Alien chapter 27 . 7/7
Awww the ending was so beautiful and sadness but AMAZING I..I..I can't even begin to the describe how wonderful the whole thing was..but what I don't understand is why the fairy godmother didn't make Ceceil kids STILL a great story that Disney should consider .')
| Aliens chapter 25 . 7/7
OMG THIS IS THE MOST FUCKING AMAZING Cinderella story EVER!
| Alien chapter 1 . 7/6
It was ok I guess
| Crazy Hetalia chapter 27 . 6/23
I cane across this story at 1 am hoping to read just some silly retold Cinderella story, but between males. I never expected any of this, and I have to admit, that last chapter really tugged at my heart strings. Your writing was wonderful (save for a few spelling mistakes that can be easily looked over), and the characters themselves were well represented. I really enjoyed your story, thank you for writing such a wonderful thing!
| 05xRi-chanx27 chapter 27 . 3/29
Well, that kinda hit the feels *sniff*
But, beautiful story, loved it (I remember not even wanting to sleep cuz' I wanted to read more V)
Thanks for the story! And also for completing it! You just gotta appreciate those
| Angelicia chapter 26 . 12/2/2014
I was actually shipping Desmond and Cinder at first but then Desmond raped Cinder and I was just like god dammit Desmond! I like the way it ended but I would like to see what it would have been like if Cinder chose Desmond. :)
| Ivy2121 chapter 27 . 6/19/2014
That was just a perfectly beautiful story with a side dish of tragedy.
| Ivy2121 chapter 9 . 6/18/2014
This is great and there are no grammar mistakes as far as I could see.
| ER0R chapter 27 . 11/10/2013
My god ;-;
I finished this whole story in 2 days
I nearly cried at the end
Very good job
| STORMIC chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
OMG WHAT THE FUCKIN FRUIT CAKE MOTHER OF SHITTY ENGLANDS PEARLS ...
| stormic chapter 6 . 10/1/2013
ohhhhh his PRAY this is gonna get good
| Xxanimefangurl2294xX chapter 27 . 8/30/2013
Aw i loved this story
Good job :) * I sorta ship Desmond and Cinder o:
Hehehe anyways awesome story c:
| theponyrider chapter 27 . 8/1/2013
It was an interesting read.
Good job, author!
| Lavonya chapter 27 . 7/24/2013
This is thee sweetest and saddest story I've ever read!
You did a /wonderful/ job on the plot and an /AMAZING/ job on the details of this story!
I don't think there are many - actually there are very few - that have this level of detail and I hope that you continue on in your writing!
| A. Sirius Riddle chapter 27 . 7/5/2013
That was Brillant! I truly Enjoyed that story Very Much.