|Reviews for The BreakUp|
| Lotus Sword chapter 5 . 8/5/2014
Don't worry, it wasn't a let-down at all! It's really amazing how you can come up with all thise small, funy situations. Like how "he was about to ask for an explanation when it litterally passed by the kitchen window." I mean, I wouldn't have thought about something like that, but you did and it made your atory a tad more fun! :3
You really are a big, big, big, big, BIG genius when it comes to writing stories!
| Lotus Sword chapter 4 . 8/5/2014
Hahaha, well, that works! Good plan, Hiroto! *thumbs up* :D
| Lotus Sword chapter 3 . 8/5/2014
I know that this fic is mainly about Burn and Gazel but I need to tell you how well you portrayed Midorikawa! There are barely any HiroMido romances without Midorikawa being a completely helpless whimp who needs Hiroto to solve every. Flipping. Little. Problem.
I like this, where Midorikawa is just as independent as in the anime. It makes the story more real :3
| Lotus Sword chapter 2 . 8/5/2014
Haha, Burn and Gazel didn't even appear but I already know that they're in character. That was a really fitting description, you know? Hmm, I wonder what kind of trouble Gazel will give them in the next chapter! :D
| Lotus Sword chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Ooh, cliffhanger! xD I just love the atmosphere that this fic creates :D It's august now, but even I feel like singing christmas carrols! :)
| Usagi Doll chapter 4 . 7/17/2014
This chapter is great! Kawaii! The way you expressed Burn's feelings mace him gentler but not weaker, so goooood! Keep up the wonderful work, Vera-chan!
| Usagi Doll chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
GazelxBurn is as cute as always0! You wrote it in a very gentle fashion and not too stiff, amazing! Go, do your best, Vera-chan!
| puriri chapter 5 . 8/12/2012
GOOD GOD WE CAN BE THE TIGHTEST FRIENDS EVER
I mean. Aphrodi and Gazel and Burn living in the same flat? Best thing ever anyone could ever put in a fanfiction. And gosh, Desarm/Hitomiko! Not to mention your writing style; not too stiff and just great.
Keep up the good job!
| ryuu-raylasucura chapter 5 . 7/27/2012
AWESOME! I love Burn/Gazel!
| noidontjustrp chapter 5 . 7/1/2012
It was amazing I loved every second/word of it. I found it funny that Afuro was single while everyone else was in a relationship.
| XxxKyroKyroxxX chapter 5 . 5/6/2012
And this paring has survived! Yes!
Thank goodness they're back together :D I couldn't take the heartbreak anylonger!
| DarkFireheartNinja chapter 5 . 1/1/2012
Lovely, just lovely 3
| HarmonySoundown chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Chaos pairing!
Even though there is yaoi in this
AND I DO HATE YAOI SORRY
It's still really well written. It's really really good.
And I especially like your ideas and your writing style. You're a really good author. I'm serious.
(Check out my stuff and you will realize compared to yours its totally crappy)
| Hibisha chapter 5 . 12/10/2011
I loved it...as expected. it was very sweet and they were very nice to buy Aphrodi that cake.
| nishanightray chapter 5 . 12/10/2011
Awn, I really love this. Thank you for wirting something so cute and sweet, that made me feel good :DDD