Reviews for Caught in the Whirlpool
LapinNoirDeCalifornie chapter 12 . 2/11/2012
F**k yeah! I've been waiting for Kushina to take a stand!
Tearhart chapter 12 . 2/11/2012
Uh oh. But they finally meet! YayaY!
Randoh chapter 12 . 2/11/2012
Things are really starting to get interesting and all the main characters are mostly in place (Naruto is a few hours or a day behind). Was really happy to see this update hit on a weekend, been waiting for it the whole week.

Just a little something that I noticed in this chapter. Minato wasnt sure what the names of Kushinas brothers are but in chapter 8, its quite clear that he remembers Arashi.
Godzillaking269 chapter 12 . 2/11/2012
I was expecting a dun sun duiuuuuunnnnnn at the end.
havenspace chapter 12 . 2/11/2012
wow! that has got to be one of your best chapters yet! The tension is built up really well, I was on the edge of my seat when Kushina walked into the building. Looking forward to the everyone's reactions to the engagement in the next chapter! And Naruto arriving. Boy am I looking forward to seeing what Kushina's family make of him.
Nyos chapter 12 . 2/11/2012
Oh, you're an evil (but great) master of building this moment up! Now I can't wait for the aftermath and the reaction when Naruto gets there!
Viridian chapter 12 . 2/11/2012
Oh no! A cliffhanger! I was hoping that the confrontation would happen earlier in the chapter, but I guess I'll have to wait until next week to find out! Poor Minato and Kushina ... there's yet another shock heading for them on the train...
ade chapter 12 . 2/11/2012
possessive Kushina. Doomed Minato.
stoplightgodess chapter 12 . 2/11/2012
Hahahahaha! Finally, I have been waiting for this moment. Auka-explosion coming right up!
Jace chapter 12 . 2/10/2012
UnbiasedBias chapter 12 . 2/10/2012
Oh my god! It finally happened! After so so so many chapters of waiting, they finally meet! So what's going to happen next? When is Naruto arriving? What do Shun and the reporter and the Kurohi dude have to do with all this? I think of all your crossovers, this one is the most tense~

Argh, Please don't leave hanging too long before you update again!
Popthepuff chapter 12 . 2/10/2012
Bada-bum. Now we need to see the reaction.
Anti-Social Otaku chapter 12 . 2/10/2012
Le gasp. The drama, the angst (not that there is any... much) and the freaking cliffhanger! God fuck it. I can't wait to find out the evil aunts reaction to that announcement and I can't believe there aren't more freaking reviews here!

This story is awesome and deserves a hell of a lot more reviews. So from now on, I'm reviewing on all the other chappies... I mean from this chapter on.
noshadowone chapter 12 . 2/10/2012
ghood chapter and good story so far this little series has been the best naruto/pokemon cross i have ever read so great good, this one actually has me excited about the next chapter and what will happen and normally that doesnt happen to often.
Kauris Azurai chapter 12 . 2/10/2012
Doomsdinner! hoo boy.

I honestly can't think of any words to do your work justice. You have some of my most favorite naruto and pokemon fanfiction all in one profile.

I am honestly impressed with the seamless integration of naruto and pokemon. In the current arc, kushina's family will prove most interesting.

I am interested in seeing how the zorua(insert name here- curse my sudden memory failure) will eventually cope with her new home.

Continue writing this masterpiece please. SincerelyKauris Azurai

"Let the flames of criticism temper your steel, as you beat upon the anvil of imagination."
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