|Reviews for The Voices That Betray Me|
| AM78 chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Not a bad start. This new character certainly has a lot of potential and possibilities. I think it would be cool if they find out the villigers were at least partially telling the truth.
The one thing I didn't like was the present-tense writing style. I think past-tense sound a lot more appropriate.
| sangoscourage chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Great first chapter! Unfortunately I have to leave it for now; but I will get back to it soon. :)
| raven1295 chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
i love it! hope you update soon :)