|Reviews for Into the Wind|
| MrsPeelWe'reNeeded chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
A great story. Very good.
| Loriel Eris chapter 1 . 6/9/2003
This was so sad! I'm sitting here still with tears in my eyes. I do wish, though, that Dana had told Mulder the truth, after all Monica and Doggit know, as well as her mother. It just seems right that Mulder should know. I still really enjoyed it tho.
| Fin Tuscany chapter 1 . 7/27/2002
Great opening line, nicely structured. Rolls forward, pulling along the reader. Nice bit with the gull. Some very good transitions, altho a few paragraphs could be tweaked here & there just so's you don't lose any of your story's mood & power. You're very good at capturing a moment, and the flash of strong emotion, but I think you've got the chops for strong narratives too-I'm thinking of that Hogwarts story you're in the middle of w/the transfer student-so I hope to see you expand your work with bigger plots and move past the vignette stage. Good story, thanks for writing it.