Reviews for Letters |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful ending to a great story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fred and George teaching him to shave was excellent. His parting words to Mr and Mrs Weasley, very beautifully done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh the plot thickens. Impressed with Harry's letter to Dudley. Very well done; perfectly in Harry's voice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cliffy. Ron really did find himself in a lousy situation. I think he would have been back after walking it off. People do need time, space, to cool down, and that's what he tried to do. If he hadn't been snatched he'd have been back before morning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really touching. Heartbreak mixed in with hope for the future. His letter to Luna was perfect. Hagrid's was a bit of a let down, shorter and with less explanation of just how much his care meant to Harry compared to the abuse he endured. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that last letter got me to tear up. Very well done. The letters all carry that Harry's voice, and Teddy's reactions are realistic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() j'ai énormément pleuré . très belle histoire |
![]() ![]() ![]() Crying |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t know what I was expecting when I opened this story but it was great and I definitely cried. I could see Harry writing something like this and I could see Teddy reading it. I really enjoyed this story. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A way to bring Teddy’s thougths into this can be to have him read the letter first and then go over it in his head? Perhaps that will work? Anyway i love this way of letting Teddy find out more abaut how tings was in the war. Never give up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wasn't sure what to expect but incredibly tense, great job. Never really thought about how many things would have been unsaid after the war. Poor 17 year old Harry never imagined those letters would come back to bite him. |
![]() ![]() this is just perfect |
![]() ![]() i love george in this. really wanted to see your take in him learning what happened to the trio throughout the years, but speacially at the horcrux hunt |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! So beautifully written! I've never read a fiction of this genre..of teddy getting to know the reality of war..but I found it very beautiful. |