|Reviews for The Line Begins to Blur|
| grimreaper227 chapter 22 . 1/12
one of the best fanfics i ever read!
| Loyaltothelegion chapter 22 . 12/29/2013
I don't know if you really do this, but I'd like to make a request. Perhaps a intimite scene with an elf? Honestly, you're a brilliant writer, it's funny, and it is an all round entertaining read. Perhaps a deal is made with the witches of the Hagraven coven. Not all hag ravens true to kill you on site, and she may wish to 'reward' one or some of her followers.
| Guest chapter 22 . 12/5/2013
I think this chapter was very good, and you should continue in the samestyle.
| The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 22 . 11/19/2013
I say go for the threesome by having Lydia and Kailev sleep in the Tavern/Inn and having the shopkeeper's sister see them check in and sneak in later while they're having sex.
Or, conversely, have the Wood Elf and the Nord who were vying for the girls affections try to assassinate Kailev while he's sleeping or something
Either one would be an interesting thing to happen in Riverwood.
| DarkquillMaster chapter 22 . 11/18/2013
I must say I'm really happy to have another chapter of this wonderful story! :) Always a great read. I can hardly wait for the next!
| Vermin-lord chapter 21 . 8/28/2013
Argonian with the dragon blood and ability to breathe fire. He's the closest a dragonborn can get to actualy being a dragon
| DarkquillMaster chapter 21 . 8/25/2013
I'm so happy to see an update, and a lengthy one at that! If you need help writing or someone to bounce ideas off of I'm always available. Cheers! :)
| Raex chapter 21 . 8/25/2013
Good chapter, one thing I thought you should be made aware of though: Broadswords are one-handed swords, the Steel Greatsword is actually closer to a Zweihander in shape.
| The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 21 . 8/24/2013
"I can't claim to be the best in town. Eorlund Grey-Mane has that title. The man's steel is legendary,"
If I have to hear that one more time...I always fast travel to Whiterun for all my smithing needs, but her repeated lines get annoying very fast.
| soulreaver798 chapter 19 . 8/8/2013
After reading the entire story again, afer noticing you had changed a few things along the way, i noticed there are more grammatical errors than the first time i read it. not enough to really hinder the story in anyway, just something i thought i would point out. also, id like to praise you on the way you have handled the companions so far. there lines from the game are bland, their reactions equally boring. you gave enough life to their story that they might actually be worthy to read about. although it would be quite interesting on how kai would take the whole werewolf thing if you choose to follow through the entire quest. perhaps actually add dialogue to kodlak as well. in the game he was rather distant the entire time. anyways, good story and hope you manage to continue. i do hate cliff hangers, they ruin many stories.
| The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 20 . 8/7/2013
| Drakon141 chapter 20 . 8/1/2013
Loving it so far, wish you updated more often! Still waiting on that steamy argonian/khajiit intercourse here ;D Curious to see what you'll do with the werewolf/vampire lord options and what not. Keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chapter!
| soulreaver798 chapter 20 . 7/16/2013
Simply fascinating. i enjoy your work, and look forward to more. i am curious as to the direction of plot now, considering he was so attached to lydia
| t3ej4y chapter 20 . 7/14/2013
The character interactions are getting more and more interesting, and the action is pretty good too. Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter! :)
| gt chapter 1 . 7/12/2013