Reviews for WHN Return To Fiji
kaleen1212 chapter 10 . 1/8/2012
Good story. Thanks for writing an Ironside fiction.
kaleen1212 chapter 10 . 1/8/2012
Good story. Thanks for writing an Ironside fiction.
julieo chapter 10 . 1/3/2012
great story! loved your description of Ed as a pirate with: "his five o'clock shadow, the damaged shirt, his bandaged arm". ahhhh!

please write more soon. x
Charlotte chapter 10 . 1/2/2012
Thoroughly enjoyed your story! Thank you
lemonpig73 chapter 9 . 12/31/2011
Poor Chief, you're not very nice with him but I love your story!

Please post again soon. :)
bluesybelge chapter 8 . 12/25/2011
Poor Chief. This certainly isn't going to make him love your beautiful country. :-)
kaleen1212 chapter 8 . 12/24/2011
Oh to have had him and to lose him again! Now they have to start all over again. Can't wait to see what happens next.
charlotte chapter 8 . 12/24/2011
Great update! I love your writing!
bluesybelge chapter 7 . 12/23/2011
Exciting that's what it is.
bluesybelge chapter 5 . 12/17/2011
Suspense is all around. I read it and feel like I'm there too. The places you name. I've been there even if it was a long time ago. And yes... the Via Mala is beautiful.

Ah die schöne Schweiz. Jeder mal dass ich durch ihren Land fahre auf dem weg nach Italien denke ich: hier möchte ich so gerne wohnen.
kaleen1212 chapter 5 . 12/16/2011
Another cliff hanger. Was one of those the car Ed saw the chief in? Next chapter please.
kaleen1212 chapter 5 . 12/16/2011
Another cliff hanger. Was one of those the car Ed saw the chief in? Next chapter please.
kaleen1212 chapter 4 . 12/10/2011
Good story line with a good developing plot. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Charlotte chapter 4 . 12/10/2011
Interesting story which I am so enjoying!
kaleen1212 chapter 3 . 12/5/2011
You like those cliff hangers! Waiting to know what that message ment.
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