Reviews for As If
N chapter 24 . 12/22/2016
How have I not read this incredible, beautiful story until now? I *adore* this. You've got such a refreshing take on Literati reunions. I also love the idea of Jess in Pakistan, the way you've integrated the culture into the story. I really, really hope you come back and update soon. You're a wonderful writer x
Don Draper's Bitch chapter 2 . 12/17/2016
Aww that freak out on the phone was kind of funny and do very Rory. I am really enjoying the ease and natural flow of their conversations which you keep in character but still make yours (the voice that is), great work.
Don Draper's Bitch chapter 1 . 12/5/2016
I enjoy your writing. It sometimes feels clustered and spread out but in the best of ways. I like being in the characters head and thoughts but at the same time not.
Guest chapter 24 . 7/1/2015
Incredible story! Read the entire story today and have loved it. You write so beautifully. Please continue!
KEMLEM81 chapter 24 . 6/27/2015
What a story! I only just started reading this yesterday and am pleased to know you're still continuing it. You're writing style is fantastic and you've brought me to tears several times now. I look forward to continuing to follow this story and see where you take it from here.
Guest chapter 23 . 4/15/2015
Hi, this plot has seriously surprised me. please continue!
Tina0609 chapter 23 . 4/11/2015
I just found your stoy and really really hope you continue it some time...maybe? Mostly because I love it and love how you wrote those characters and the drama. An well, as you wrote in your A/N, I want them to be together and since the last chapters were so well written I don't want to ignore them to get my happy ending ;)
So please, keep going!
fsugrad05 chapter 23 . 1/21/2015
Love this story, so different from anything I've read on here. Please finish!
ekwibbels chapter 23 . 11/21/2014
Wish the chapter was a little longer and was a little meatier. But I'm glad glad they're where they are
ZA ZA zoom chapter 23 . 11/21/2014
I bloody love this story. So happy you updated.
ZA ZA zoom chapter 22 . 6/2/2014
Please make them be happy together again. Its such a shame for the both of them that they are not. Please don't make them get a divorce.
ZA ZA zoom chapter 21 . 5/29/2014
Hopefully your next chapter is as good as this one.
Melissamax22 chapter 21 . 3/12/2014
Update soon
Scarlet3086 chapter 21 . 2/24/2014
It was a little confusing, but I like that it will be fleshed out a little later. Makes for an interesting read that way. thanks!
allessandramari chapter 21 . 2/24/2014
Actually, I didn't have any trouble following where you led. Your time jump indicators worked fine. I'm glad you updated this story, I found it fairly early on in my reading of fanfic, and always wanted to know what happened next.

"She didn't want him around. And right there, this very second, Jess Mariano's world ended. Like someone kicked the air out of his lungs. For a short moment time stood still, realization dawning, enveloping him in its numb wake. Then the moment was over, the sound of her pulse from the monitor breaking through the silence with his head. She was alive. She was still there. Maybe it was the last thing she wanted right now, but he was. He was there"

Really loved that section...
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