|Reviews for As If|
| Scarlet3086 chapter 21 . 2/24
It was a little confusing, but I like that it will be fleshed out a little later. Makes for an interesting read that way. thanks!
| allessandramari chapter 21 . 2/24
Actually, I didn't have any trouble following where you led. Your time jump indicators worked fine. I'm glad you updated this story, I found it fairly early on in my reading of fanfic, and always wanted to know what happened next.
"She didn't want him around. And right there, this very second, Jess Mariano's world ended. Like someone kicked the air out of his lungs. For a short moment time stood still, realization dawning, enveloping him in its numb wake. Then the moment was over, the sound of her pulse from the monitor breaking through the silence with his head. She was alive. She was still there. Maybe it was the last thing she wanted right now, but he was. He was there"
Really loved that section...
| ZA ZA zoom chapter 21 . 2/24
Great chapter but sad how they lost the baby.
| ZA ZA zoom chapter 20 . 2/22
Please continue writing this story. I wanna find out if Rory's pregnant because of the whole late night food cravings.
| ZA ZA zoom chapter 20 . 2/22
Please continue writing this story. I wanna find out if Rory's pregnant because of the whole late night craving thing.
| marie chapter 20 . 12/26/2013
wow, I'm hooked. I hope you continue writing this story.
| Lyra chapter 5 . 1/28/2013
Ok thank god no cancer!
Nice dancing scene!
Go back to reading...
| Lyra chapter 4 . 1/28/2013
Nice and true story from aarif. Poor Lorelei! I can really feel for her, hope for the best...
| Lyra chapter 3 . 1/28/2013
Great chapter! I like the idea of Rory having several realationships before returning to SH. It gives the story a ralistic backgound. Like!
| Lyra chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
You have a very nice style, and by the way, i tried the trick, it works ...:-)
| Lyra chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Nice opening, but the blonde? Really?
Back to reading...
| Gilmoregirls1197 chapter 20 . 1/27/2013
Interesting! I am looking forward to reading more
| literatilover13 chapter 19 . 1/15/2013
i love love love this story! please update soon!
| rmb151106 chapter 19 . 12/29/2012
This is such a good story! I read through all the chapters you have right now twice and ate up every single word! I really hope you update this soon cause I'm going crazy with the wait of finding out what Ariaf needs help with and how Jess will go with this. I also really love how you're playing out Jess and Rory's relationship and I would love to see how planning their wedding day and the wedding day itself went. Please keep writing and someday finish this story cause it's too good to give up on.
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/9/2012
What a surprise! Your Paris sounded a lot like the Paris of ASP, except I sincerely doubt that that Paris would perform any kind of surgery after drinking. She was definitely not this kind of risk taker. But I love the whole Aarif/Jess/Rory dynamic, and Paris' rambling about terrorist/potato eating was hilarious. I think I keep falling more in love with your Jess every chapter.