Reviews for Liberation Chronicle: Starting a Force
Guest chapter 6 . 5/21
Good story.
0730 chapter 6 . 1/10
Keep going very good so far
Assistant Elite General Matteo chapter 2 . 10/18/2017
Come on, continue this comrade
TheBronzeLine chapter 6 . 7/16/2017
I believe the fourteen tanks bit and Agnes' new crush. The rest is ridiculous xD

Update pls?
Pretty pls?
I have ice cream.
TheBronzeLine chapter 5 . 7/16/2017
That seems to be WAY too much ammunition for a small force to produce. I'm calling bullshit.

Other than that, still ok.
TheBronzeLine chapter 4 . 7/16/2017
A very rare exception for fast paced stories indeed. FUCK THE PLOT LET'S GET TO THE GOOD SHIT!
TheBronzeLine chapter 3 . 7/16/2017
This breached the integrity of my willing suspension of disbelief and jeopardized my immersion...

...to hilarious levels.

What the fuck just happened?! XDDDD Deus Ex Machina decided to open up again!
TheBronzeLine chapter 2 . 7/16/2017
I've never been fond of fast paced stories, but this is a extremely rare exception. Aside from somewhat questionable phrasing, it doesn't break my immersion and willing suspension of disbelief is intact. The phrasing is "military" sounding enough, I suppose.
TheBronzeLine chapter 1 . 7/16/2017
Lmao just instantly rally, come up with a silly name a 10 year old COD player would use and march onto chapter 2.

Pacing was fast, good grammar except for "Fast mobility" as it should be "high mobility".

Eh, plausible. Naïve, excited villagers make for excellent conscript.
56006 chapter 6 . 2/18/2015
Whats PTSD?
Great story you've made here
Rex chapter 6 . 10/25/2014
Awsome love it so much have no idea how the guns look but i can imagine keep it up
coronadomontes chapter 6 . 1/4/2014
Este fanfic es maravilloso, increible mas capitulos por fabor
MODERN ARMED FORCE chapter 6 . 6/25/2013
Great story update soon
aznxa21 chapter 6 . 6/19/2013
Interesting how you did the story too bad you aren't updating it anymore.
guywholikesthis chapter 6 . 2/11/2013
Amazing. Man you showed those nobles hpw war is done in our world! Please continue
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