|Reviews for Scar, Taka, and Wazimu|
| MarkPol chapter 27 . 11/29/2012
Great story! And this may sound farfetched - but your explanation of Taka/ Scars change and madness is the most believeable on the site. Characters are so real, that it is almost like another film. Mufasa was a little too pompous in my opinion, but we did not seen him much in the film so it might me alright. The story seemed a little rushed (for examle - I would like to see more interaction between Simba1 and Simba2, the same for Nalas). Plot is very good, I don't have anything bad to point at. And ofcourse I am enthralled to hear about sequel - I will dig into it when I have some free time.
All in one - fantastic story with great plot, very good characters and hilarious humor!
| MarkPol chapter 9 . 11/28/2012
"Yell abuse at the moon" - that just made my day!
Great story so far, I will write some more when I finish it.
| GeminiGemelo chapter 27 . 11/26/2012
WOAH, this thing is over? Goodness, I didn't think the end was coming so soon... O.o And yet it was still so satisfying. :D (Of course, I said the same thing after reading ArizonaSivy's fic From Behind Bars... XD dang those quick, emotional endings!)
In any case, I see that this is indeed the one year anniversary of this fic: impressive! :o Of course, it'd be nice if I could finish, say, Trampled in a year, but that looks doubtful. lol So nice work.
The ending was great - I loved Scar's (or should I say Taka's?) conversion to his old self, and how he finally got to be king without having to kill anyone. I honestly hope that he does a good job of ruling the kingdom and that his subjects come to accept him. :) It'd be nice, wouldn't it? He deserves it at this point, after all. :p You captured his trepidation and nervousness well.
Oh, and while I'm here... the battle scene from last chapter! Very nice work, good descriptions and everything. I have to say that I found the whole thing somewhat amusing. This line in particular found me laughing, which is something I rarely do... XD
"'Rafiki!' yelled Wazimu. A few people glanced at it, and Wazimu shrugged. 'You looked left out.'"
That was perfect! XD lolol
Now, to end this fic... :[ Although I suppose it's not all bad, since I'll be seeing you over at the advent fic soon enough. :p I'd dearly appreciate (read: sorely need) a sequel to this, but I'm sure you've heard that enough already. So no pressure. XD Thanks so much for the nice dedication - it was a pleasant surprise to be mentioned in this fic. :)
Until next time!
| T5Tango chapter 27 . 11/26/2012
Overall, I thought this story was very intriguing. It was different, but in a good way. However, I felt the ending was a bit rushed and incomplete, though that may come from the fact that I'm a huge Simba fan. Great work!
| Hazel yep me chapter 27 . 11/26/2012
And so a great era comes to a sad end... Which doesn't mean it wasn't still FANTASTIC. My dear Ba- IronicSnap, hoooooooooooooow do you manage to be so good at this?! Would you be terribly against me printing this out so I can read it whenever I like? GUYS GUYS MAKE SURE YOU READ THE ADVENT FIC it's gonna be amazing.
| Dimas chapter 27 . 11/26/2012
I like the story and especially the time travel-centric and the interaction between the past and future versions of the characters. However, the fic has a sort of ambigious ending, so I didn't get the following points:
1) What happened to Wazimu (and Simba, for that matter)? How exactly was he defeated.
2) How would Scar return to the past if he's a temporary king in the future? Wouldn't it cause a time paradox?
I sort of thought that in the end the two timelines would merge into a a single new one.
All in all, it's your story and I liked it the way it is.
| T5Tango chapter 26 . 11/18/2012
I'm happy for Scar, or Taka should I say. But NOT SIMBA! Great, intense chapter, hope you update soon!
| T5Tango chapter 25 . 10/8/2012
Ahh, the cliff-hanger! I'm on the edge of my chair!
| T5Tango chapter 22 . 10/8/2012
Whoa who will rule if Kovu and Kiara abdicate? And what's gonna happen?!
| T5Tango chapter 21 . 10/8/2012
You Simba Hater, lol im kidding, but do you really think he's dumb? Hey, dont let ppl put you down for you only live once, it's cool and true!
| T5Tango chapter 20 . 10/8/2012
Oh this is so good! You really know how to write with humor!
YOLO, I have friends who go around saying that ALL the time!
| T5Tango chapter 13 . 10/7/2012
Awww, poor Simba, all this is just too much for him.
| T5Tango chapter 12 . 10/7/2012
Great insights into each of the characters, some were so true to character it was comical.
| T5Tango chapter 11 . 10/7/2012
Oh the comparison of sunshine and daises was hilarious! And Scar and Zira...hmm. Great chapter!
| T5Tango chapter 10 . 10/7/2012
Whoa, didn't think you were gonna bring Kovu and Kiara into this!