|Reviews for The Machine Shop|
| Eliza chapter 16 . 2/18
Nice story but wished the ending wasn't so rushed.
| Runaway'96 chapter 16 . 2/1
I loved this story!
So good! :)
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/16
I hope you original writing is as successful as your fanfic. Loved it!
| shar0525 chapter 12 . 12/30/2013
So somehow I googled who owns de ja vu and dudes name is Harry Mahoney and he's from Durand. Remember the dirty durands? The x-rated porn drive in along I-69? Yikes did I date myself with that ?
Story is taking me back down memory lane. There was a club on Dort hwy across from franks/kmart called Empire (maybe?). Is machine shop by there? Also wasn't the kranks motel in that area?
| shar0525 chapter 7 . 12/30/2013
You are from flint! You know Hurley
| shar0525 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Ok I'm from flint (grand blanc actually). Moved 30 yrs ago but spent my 'youth' hanging on Dort Ave. Contos to be more precise. I know Contos, as I remember it, no longer exists. My goodness admitting I hung at Contos tells me I has a misspent youth!
I do not remember the Machine Shop. The club as described in the story is reminiscent of Contos. Drugs, live rock, drugs, bikers, drugs, parking lot fights, drugs...
Did we share the same misspent youth? ;)
Are you writing about my life? :)
| 84gemstone chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
OMG I hope Tanya cheated and that's why Edward doesn't want Bella...yet. Loving the story
| thelittlegerman chapter 9 . 12/6/2013
What a story!
| thelittlegerman chapter 8 . 12/6/2013
Aww she crawled into bed with him, right? Right?
| thelittlegerman chapter 7 . 12/6/2013
That slimebag. I hope she is not hurt too badly.
| thelittlegerman chapter 6 . 12/6/2013
His ex-wife. Well I am sure that is not his child. Hence the reason for the EX.
| thelittlegerman chapter 5 . 12/5/2013
| thelittlegerman chapter 4 . 12/3/2013
I knew Tyler was important. Poor Rose. It seems like her life is spinning out of control. Hopefully she will get back on track avoiding Bella was, obviously, not a good idea. Though I kind of understand his line of thinking.
| thelittlegerman chapter 3 . 12/3/2013
A war hero? A purple heart? They do not give those away lightly. Who is Tyler? Or rather who was Tyler? A man in his unit definitely, but maybe more than that. A friend? And Rose and Emmet? Adorable!
| thelittlegerman chapter 2 . 12/3/2013
So Edward was a soldier. Who did he lose? The wounds on his chest are likely gunshot wounds,right...? And Bella seems to fit into the crew quite nicely. Also, who is the owner of the strip club? Jacob?Aro?