Reviews for Not Old, Alone or Done For
Clever Lass chapter 9 . 12/6/2011
I have just yesterday devoured all of J.M. Barrie's _Peter Pan_, followed by watching "Hook" and the 2003 "Peter Pan." I think I've found my newest obsession. Love your characterizations. Enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing. Looking forward to the next update!
Mafsarhet chapter 8 . 12/5/2011
Lovely, lovely! There was only one place where it was odd that you switched POV's and that was..uh...somewhere where you had James pov while Wendy moaned into his mouth, while the rest of the scene is definitely Wendy's pov. But that hardly matters as this chapter is wonderful!

Hook's purchasing things for her, his gallantry, even his abandoning the idea of using her as leverage, is all so *huggles!* lovely!

I have a foreboding of what comes next, but it will all be good even if I'm right. :).

These two are so good for each other!

Hmmm...what will Peter and the fairies think? :D
Psyko-chan chapter 9 . 12/5/2011
Ow Damn... the end really was... ow damn... I think i'll talk about the rest of the fic before getting to the end...

And a dream? I really hadn't espected that! Poor Hook, having to handle it, without handling it, and Wendy not knowing what's happening.

Lovely brushing scene. Very homely (?)

Oh I really like Mr Smee, whenever he appears! Paulie is lovely too. *He reminds me a little of Quasimodo, from the Hunchback of Notre Dame* Another lovely scene.

And then hell breaks lose... Very well writen, and really strong but so... Heart-clenching... Poor Wendy was scared out of her life! And with all the reasons and 12 more! Hook may say he wasn't being himself, but it was his faut he got drunk... I was really sad for Wendy since the moment she saw the whore, and all the things that happened after... like, I don't really know what to say exactely! Damn!

You need to keep writing! I need the next chapter!

I'll be waiting anxiously!

Psy
Psyko-chan chapter 8 . 12/5/2011
Ow, wow... o.o

I though she'd put more of a fight... Alraight, they fought, but I thought She'd puta a little more effort resisting... *Well, if I was in her place, I don't think I would try too hard either XD*

Lovely scene at the town!

*going to read the next!*

Psy
BigPapiJ9 chapter 9 . 12/5/2011
Ohhh! This story is really coming along nicely! MORE..MORE,give me more!
BlackEyedSally chapter 9 . 12/5/2011
That was so scary its the first time in a hook/wendy that i .scared of hook :(

not fair.

i do hope hook sorts things out with wendy. that was truly a well written yet :‘(
KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 8 . 12/4/2011
Oh my, (fans self) steamy lemonlime. Thouh ill laugh if smee or someone bursts in to ruin the moment
BlackEyedSally chapter 8 . 12/4/2011
Omg i love you story. your portrayal of hook is omg XD keep writing hun. xxx
BigPapiJ9 chapter 8 . 12/3/2011
Oh my! I love it! Chapters 7 & 8 were great! Keep going, I am surely hooked!
Psyko-chan chapter 7 . 12/3/2011
Ow, the awkward moment qhen the drunkness goes away... I thought she'd make some kind of scandal...

"In vino veritas" absolutely truth and I lughed when I read it! A friend of mine always says 'the alcohol goes in, the truth goes out' XD

And the poor dears struggling with their feelings... 'There is surely a special place in hell for me' It really made my heart clench...

It's hard for him to have good fellings and it's hard for her to have good feelings for him...

The harpsichord scene was absolutely lovely, even if the awkwardness returned after it.

*Oh! Just wanted to add that I love Mr. Smee! ;D*

I'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter!

Psy
AndiRae chapter 7 . 12/3/2011
I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is just lovely!
Laurielove chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Poor Wendy, I so feel for her - forced into a marriage she doesn't want. Still ... she could always look for adventure elsewhere ... hint hint.

A great start with some lovely period setting. Super language and dialogue. Bravo. LL x
Mafsarhet chapter 5 . 12/2/2011
Indeed, the novelty would wear off when all the kids want you to do is entertain them, and then when you are hurting they don't take you seriously!

You are capturing the essence of children vs adult quite well! Wendy still loves children, of course, and dreams, but sees that when things go badly they can't help much!

Wow...seeing Peter just shrug and say, "I forgot," to visit was very hurtful.

I'm glad to see Maila again and glad that she had misgivings regarding Hook and his men. That you addressed that here was terrific. I had wondered where she went and why she stayed away!

And now she's annoying Hook but for good reason! Hee hee! Delightful!
Mafsarhet chapter 4 . 12/2/2011
Brief, but to the point, Hook and Wendy are! She knows why he saved her and he knows that she and her brothers had never intended to be her enemies.

Interesting how Hook is willing to allow his "lure" for Peter to leave him so easily? Maybe he feels badly? He obviously has some heart after all, and a conscience.

Poor embarrassed Wendy! Having known that the good Captain has seen her nude and had to treat her wounds without regard to her modesty. LOL Well, at least she's alive and has something to wear!

I loved the casual Hook with the embarrassed and confused Wendy. I also love how he is so at ease despite his own observations of how she has grown into a young woman. Of course he couldn't help but latch on to the word 'fiance' as soon as she uttered it, and then sounded a tad jealous when he mentioned Peter's possible reaction to the news?

Well, we'll soon see! Another entertaining chapter. :D
Mafsarhet chapter 3 . 12/2/2011
Well, she's made it back! Heh...but the dreaded corset had its uses, didn't it? I like your logic with how the mermaids couldn't really get a grasp on her torso and that Hook knew that. Also, I wonder why he isn't angry? Probably revenge on his mind for now!

It's good to see that Hook does have his limits on what lines he'd cross, and that taking advantage of a woman is not one of them. Nicely done!

I totally forgot about the fairies and how they could be summoned. That was well done; having Wendy dream and wish and still have her hopes and that Maila picked up on that. I hope to see more of Maila sometime.

I also, since I've forgotten everything! can't wait to see Peter and his boys. Heh... Peter won't be able to resist the lure of Wendy, will he?

I can't help but wonder now what our dear Captain Hook may be dreaming about? ;)
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