Reviews for A Hope Renewed |
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SanguineTaurean chapter 31 . 3/21/2017 Anna Grace Whitlock. It's a gorgeous name! Bella will be birthing some babies, too. Oh, James...you awful, vile person. I guess Tanbitch was visited by Karma. It's time Karma smack James around, don't you agree?! |
SanguineTaurean chapter 29 . 3/21/2017 Whew...this Edward is so loving, sweet, and tender. And that kiss where it's passionate then he nips at her lower lip...like in the movies...several times...it always gets me. GAH! It's wonderful that Bella wants to educate the estate worker's children. I'm sorry her father passed. It's going to be so hard on her even though it was expected. With James and Tanbitch still missing there's that still hanging over everyone's head. It's going to be horrible when he/they show up because I'm afraid Edward will be shot. |
SanguineTaurean chapter 28 . 3/21/2017 Wonderful! They had all the estate workers and their families for a meal, and explained about James. Didn't Jessica assist in the house/private quarters earlier in the story? And didn't one of them go in and out rooms when Edward heard but didn't see them? I remember thinking someone was spying on them, and he voiced the same concern or thought about nosy servants. SURELY Tyler isn't one?! No... I wonder if Bella is thinking about teaching the estate workers' children. That would be a wonderful idea. Of course James escapes. He has the (stolen) money to buy people. |
SanguineTaurean chapter 27 . 3/21/2017 Wow! Bella actually grew some balls, trusted Edward, and told him everything about the little visit from that nasty James. I'm impressed. lol The authorities worked quickly in arresting James, too. That's a great relief! I wonder where Tanbitch is hiding, and what her lies will be in all this? |
SanguineTaurean chapter 26 . 3/21/2017 Well, sht! I knew this was coming but still... Knowing Bella she won't tell anyone and break Edward's heart, until he and Jasper finally figure it out. Now, how did James and Tanbitch acquaint? |
SanguineTaurean chapter 25 . 3/21/2017 Don't you just love Alice, Jasper, Jane, Tyler, and Mrs. Cope in this story?! |
SanguineTaurean chapter 24 . 3/21/2017 Finally! Bella is again well, up and about, but it will still take time for her to fully recover. Edward loves her so much! Rosethorn. It's time for her to grovel, and beg for Bella's forgiveness, which we all know she will give. Ohhh...the missing and illustrious Mr. Smith shows his face. He was hired as a stone mason, or just another grounds keeper? In the middle of winter, on Christmas Eve? Either way, why is he back at Collingsworth? To try and steal from the new owners, too? Won't he get a HUGE surprise?! I'm glad Bella recognized him and mentioned his name to Edward. |
SanguineTaurean chapter 22 . 3/21/2017 B&E's love life has certainly proceeded forth rather quickly once the ball was over, and ever since. ;) Good for them! Maybe Bella now accepts that she has a permanent place in his heart and home. As for Rosethorn... :P And good riddance to Tanbitch, too! I wonder if Emma will find her way to Charlie's cottage, and he thinks she is Bella. I was betting that Mr. Smith's first name was James. lol |
SanguineTaurean chapter 21 . 3/21/2017 Oh, my! He certainly put Mrs. Mallory in her place in such a gentlemanly way, but yet stomped out her evil tongue and thoughts. Touche, Mr. Cullen! |
SanguineTaurean chapter 20 . 3/21/2017 *giggling* Bella told Edward about Tanbitch and what she said. I can't wait for that explosion! Bella's first time was certainly a LOT better than mine! lol I love how your Edward's are so sweet, tender, and loving...especially for the first time with their wives/loves. Oh! You wanted to know how we knew to read this story. Several factors. I've seen your name on fb as you are friends with some of my friends so I've been curious but in the middle of other stories. But the one that got me here is your story, "He Came Along" was listed in the poll of Top Ten Completed Fics for January 2017 on twifanfictionrecs dot com. I read that one (LOVED IT!) and just started reading your other stories and one shots. TADA! :) |
SanguineTaurean chapter 19 . 3/21/2017 The ball was perfect! The evening was a success, Bella was definitely the Belle of the Ball, and a beautiful one, too. To those who left after their entrance and announcement I hope she puts them in their place if they ever comment to her about her new and present station in life. As to the nasty coldness of Tanbitch and Rosethorn, to hell with those she-devils. I hope Bella lets Edward know what transpired, and that he does not catch himself in their sticky web of deceit. Ick. |
SanguineTaurean chapter 18 . 3/21/2017 TG for Edward, his love for his wife, the tender night and next morning, his confession and proof of his love, returning the pendant to her, and his stance against Rose's rudeness. On with the ball! |
SanguineTaurean chapter 17 . 3/20/2017 Yes! Okay, now that they have declared their love for one another, and just sleeping together, it's a start. Now for Edward to speak with Rose...yeah, that will be good. OH! The ball is the next evening! |
Guest chapter 20 . 3/20/2017 I have read "he came along" and 20 chapters into this story i can't find myself to read the rest because it's too familiar. |
SanguineTaurean chapter 16 . 3/20/2017 Nuh unh...Bella cannot blame Edward for knowing about the lack of annulment when she has done everything not to be with him the past three days for him to tell her! She needs to put on her big girl bloomers, admit she loves him, get over her insecurities, tell him what Rose said, and then together they can decide what happens with her father. I hope Edward has the balls to get her to see all this. |