Reviews for A Hope Renewed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ohhh like wow! what a magnificently written first time lovemaking for these two. i do hope it was edwards first time.. anyways you did it so much justice. portrayed edward as a considerate thoughtful lover and bella as a willing yielding passionate young bride. loved it! i'm also very glad that he managed to get bella to tell him what happened with tanya and can't wait to see how he deals with that. but yes such a sigh of relief that they have finally consummated their marriage and sealed their love. my heart is so happy. so much more i want to say but my reviews are long enough as it is. very satisfying chapter ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() fuck i just hate rosalie and her bitchiness and obviously tanya is the same. they need to be sternly put in their place. i can't believe that rosalie is still being that way. i'd kick her out of my fucking house! anyways that was an awesome chapter otherwise. was so proud of bella holding her head high in honor of edward presenting her as his wife and reigning everything in to make him proud. love alice and glad that all the others accept her no qualms. love your work. now for the next chapter? tee hee |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol they kinda had the sex talk. you write bellas foreign feelings her body is going through so accurately it's such a joy to read. so glad they are finally on the same page with everything. and yes edward getting up rosalie...she's got a fucking nerve and i was pissed at bella sticking up for her or not making her man up to the error of her ways. there is a way to address the reasons bella thinks rose gave for what she said but really she just wanted her friend to have edward and now that bella has edward she's doing everything she can to discredit her. haha loved when edward said he had to question rosalies upbringing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yayyyyyy fiiiiiiiinaaally! this chapter definitely made my heart happy and i am so glad that bella ended up being the first to say ILY! i absolutely loved their talking and how she told him everything well after he coaxed it out of her of course. and it's great that he had no interest in TD whatsoever lol. i still think rosalie is a total bitch...hate her. but it's great that e&b are together in his bed...lol baby steps. thankyou for putting my heart back together lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wahhhh see total wuss! But yes im so angry at bella geez! Glad that edward has put his foot down. Hope he finds out about what rosalie said and rips into her |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoaaaaaa!omg this was soooo painful to read. I am the ultimate angst wuss i have to tell you. You have no idea! I hate it! Lol. I cried, and am sooo fucking angry at that bitch rosalie! My heart was hurting whilst reading the second half of this. Poor bella and to top it off her father didn't recognise her :( i am so glad edward did not leave her alone i hope she has come to her senses ànd follows her heart and not let what that bitch says affect her. Sorry about the cursing. being passionate about these two and an angst wuss is not a good . well written chapter that's for sure. I will read on with caution. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yayyyyy! Omg the suspense was killing me. Lol. Geez i do hope bella is completely honest with edward about her feelings. Because i am so loving those bloody hot fiery kisses. Mmm mm i love how edward described bella as being a passion creature and how he wants to be the object of that passion! Zeowww! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh damn this made me cry...and on the bus no less! I loved their honest moment in her room and that they kissed again. Love alice esme carlisle and Emmett and and tgeir response to bella i have to say that i think out of all the stories i have read in ff i can count on one hand with a couple of fingers left over that ther was a rosalie i liked lol. Defs never liked her on the twilight series. But hey I'm open kinda. Excellent chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww what a beautiful endearing intimate moment for them. Such a sweet yet very meaningful kiss and embrace. I love it. So glad that bella just let it happen but mostly that edward seized the opportunity. He's so frickin sexy and i love how quickly taken he is by bella. They really needed to have all that time alone. Good call edward. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well wow! i didn't expect that outburst from bellas father. i am glad tho that it basically forced bella to have to tell edward the whole story which is great. it's so sad tho that she still feels an apprehension about everything and too guarded. can't she see that edward genuinely cares for her deeply. she is so lovely tho and it's good that mrs cope was there and explained to edward about how bella was feeling. still loving this and can't wait to see what edward has planned. now i have to tear myself away and go get ready for work...uhh! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh noooo! omg if she had told edward everything this wouldn't be happening right now. oh dear is edward ever gonna have a good encounter with her father lol. i am so rapt tho that edward has bought back the stuff she had to sell. he is so loving and sincere towards her and i love that mr banner sees her as a daughter. given that her friends all deserted her because she was considered i guess as lower class. another great chapter but i'm happy that i can just go right to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am so glad that edward has discovered that bella made a purchase by selling something of personal value to her. it's also cute that edward was worried about her and jasper really laid it on the line with edward...haha was so good. these two are just so adorable but i have to say that while bella was in the store i was so sure that mrs mallory was gonna be a bitch to her. so i was happy to see that she arrived home without incident. and i do hope she takes the carriage i was wondering if edward was aware that she walks everywhere. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww I was so teary when bella sold her mothers jewellery. So sad. But rapt that she bought the dress she admired. Its awesome that edward completely treats her as a husband should treat his wife. I'm finding it very hard to put this down but now i need to do some RL shit. Dammit i hate when anything gets in the way of a sensational story lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love epov always have done. Love hearing his thoughts and feelings about bella. He's falling and I'm excited. I do wish she would tell him anout her dad tho but oh well. I suspect maybe some sort of foul play happened with their funds. Anyways I'm glad for now that the marriage is still intact teehee. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok im kinda melting a litte here with edwards charm and hotness. Mmmm i love me a gentlemanly edward well actually I love me an edward full stop lol. Every chapter just keeps getting better. |