Reviews for Come on Closer
Ally chapter 2 . 11/29/2011
Yay! I'm so happy that someone is writing an actually NaruKaka story with Naruto being a guy! 3 I was getting so annoyed with looking at the updated fanfics to see a KakaNaru story with Naruto being a girl. . Whatever.

Thank you so much for writing this! 3
Yaoifangirl102 chapter 2 . 11/29/2011
cool cant wait to see what happens next
Shidoari chapter 2 . 11/29/2011
Ohhh, am swoonin' over another update. Introductions are coming along nicely, and you write at a lovely pace. I would write more but I'm stuck on a train and my stops comming up lol.

Point is: Keep up the good work!
kakashifan9 chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
No love at first sight?... I think we're going to be buddies forever. Hahahah...

And hey! High five! I'm in the middle of AP English right now! LOL But don't worry too much on mistakes; shouldn't let that get you down. (Trust me, I would know. It would explain why I haven't updated in over a year. Hahahahah.)

I'm really glad that you're so into your story, especially going off to research about the series to keep your story accurate. Obito's friendly atmosphere is overwhelming and I find myself chuckling a bit with his quick acceptance. And I have to say, Minato's relationship with Kushina seems a bit awkward, but too adorable. Hahahah.

Looking forward to more KakaNaru interactions.
KitElizaKing chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
Thanks for writing another chapter. It's shaping up to be a really interesting story. I'm looking forward to seeing how you bring Naruto and Kakashi together, and I liked the groundwork you were laying with them at Ichiraku's. Kakashi seems intrigued by the new blond in the mix.

I've got a word check for you: 'accept' means to welcome into the fold, while 'except' means to leave something out of it, roughly speaking, that is.
DREAMER1084 chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
It is interesting to see a TT fic involves both past and present parts. I've seen too many fic just make the future be destroyed by someone so the main characters went back and replaced their older selves. And I like the family moment XD
kakashifan9 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Oh, I see another time travel story coming around! Hell yes! Hahahah, and I'm glad that I'm not the only one who hates how fanfiction authors are turning Naruto into a girl. He is in no way that close to his feminine side. LOL

I'm really excited to see how this unfolds into a full-blown KakaNaru story. I love how you've built up the story and allowed Minato to find Naruto.

I've been thinking of a time travel story for Naruto to interact with a younger Kakashi for years. I'm so happy that someone is taking that idea and morphing it into a story. As you can see, I can't wait to see how this fanfiction turns out. I hope you can update as soon as possible.
KitElizaKing chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Thanks for starting this. It looks like it's going in some very interesting places. Will you be interspersing the past with the present? For instance, since Naruto is in the past, and I presume he'll be interacting with Kakashi, will the present Kakashi start to gain these memories as they are made? Then he'll know where Naruto went to. That will be an intriguing twist.

Anyway, you are so right. There are definitely not enough Kaka/Naru stories out there, and way too many femNaru ones. It's kind of cheating, don't you think? LOL
Eternaly Serene chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
I like it, it's a very good start. The way you write Naruto is very good, it's the way i like see him, smarter than he lets on.

Keep up the good work, and hope you update soon :D
LN Tora chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
I usually go by the 'can't say anything nice, shaddap' ideal, but I have to agree that the number of gender-bender fics for Naruto is a bit *high*. I know he has the sexy no jutsu, but it's really just a higher level henge. Still, people tend to develop trends that make no sense to me, so I chalk this up to being one of them.

That said, your fic has a very interesting start. I normally hold off on commenting on wips until they're complete, but I'm hoping feedback now will keep you interested enough to continue. I like the direction you're taking this, and it will be interesting to see how Naruto handles being in the past on his own, without any of the others with him as I've seen with other time travel stories. Very happy you decided to write, and looking forward to seeing more. Cheers!
Foresthunter chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
this is really good! i hope you update this soon! XD KakaNaru FOREVER! KakaSasu and KakaSaku can go to hell! :D
Shidoari chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Ahhh, am excited for the outcome/updates/ect for this story. The KakaNaru enticed me forward and the Minato and adorable Naruto interaction's was the cherry on the top.

:] Hope you update soon, am hooked so far.
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