|Reviews for No Longer Alone|
| RPGNerd chapter 5 . 10/18/2013
This is my second favorite VG cats comic on fan fiction and I really hope you guys finish this.
| DannyNeko chapter 5 . 10/12/2013
wait... it's really finished? aw... i would miss it
| Phemon13 chapter 5 . 9/1/2013
Nice job! Btw what does M.E.T.A. stand for?
And just curious, will this turn into a sappy Aeris x Leo fanfiction?
| RigidGamer chapter 4 . 8/30/2013
I just got in the VG cats fanfiction, and I'm loving this story so far. I noticed it has been awhile sine the last one was posted, is it on hiatious or done completely? I'd hate for that to be so, loving it so far.
| lohefvjirqf chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please post one soon!
| DannyNeko chapter 4 . 2/2/2013
something says me that is aeris who would stop leo
| Phemon13 chapter 4 . 1/25/2013
Somehow I feel that Aeris is going to save the day... Also DARK LEO REMINDS ME OF DARK SONIC :D Keep up the good work!
| Phemon13 chapter 3 . 12/18/2012
I'm liking the 'power' facade that Leo Aeris and Dante (XP DJ) are getting because of their traumatic lives
And goddammit I want to punch Vanessa in the face so badly...
looking forward to more!
| ThatGuyYouWishYouKnew chapter 3 . 9/23/2012
its even better than the last version and i can't wait till the next chapter... also i have a question to ask ,what format do the chapters have to be in to submit them I am planning on starting a fanfic of my own
| uknownmysteryguy chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
genius. A bit angsty (which isn't the sort of thing I'm interested in) and the official characters are out of character (a lot), but you've written it really well, and I still like it. I'm posting this on Chapter 2 and not Chapter 3 Because I believe that fate and freewill co-exist. Basically you can chalk every change, or failure of change, into the two categories. All the stuff of your choosing, Free will. All of the stuff that was out of your control, Fate. I also believe that it's possible to change fate, but not easy. Now that I think of it, luck is fate when even it doesn't know the outcome.
Where in the world in "JA'NE!" come from?
| XxCRITICxX chapter 3 . 8/1/2012
That was... Creepy. But exciting! This story is really good and it has a great plot line. I can tell Vanessa will get what's coming to her soon.
| XxCRITICxX chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
The most hated on (talking about the beginning) I'm guessing is...
dun, Dun, DUN!
Most girls make nasty comments like come f*** me Justin!
Most boys make nasty comments lime go f*** yourself Beaver!
Ha, Beiber, beaver. Get it?
| Deep Sea Anchor chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
I won't say that I love it all, but I will say that I'm loving a lot of it. This chapter perhaps especially.
So Leo has something I didn't expect. I wonder where his "gift" could take this story.
I like the fact that Vanessa's followers weren't made out to be mindless drones who blindly follow their positively evil leader. Nice character placement for Shannon, I can see this going places.
I also liked that the problem with Aeris "betraying" Leo was rapidly resolved and the ensuing bonding moment. Also how Dante reacted to it. Everybody gets some happiness.
So then I am left with this sad feeling, this feeling that I now have to wait for the next chapter. Oh woe is I!
But still, it shall be worth it. I implore you, continue in your excellence.
| Deep Sea Anchor chapter 2 . 5/31/2012
That was a good twist, making Vanessa into the impressionable child influenced into assuming the role of Leo's personal tormentor along with the additional part of delusional savior.
This chapter was actually quite relieving. The first one, I admit, had a very, and I hate using this word but it seems fitting, angsty feeling for a lot of it. But this chapter turned everything from angsty into fun, amusing and intriguing. Well done.
But perhaps my favorite part was Leo's banter with Vanessa. Who knew that Leo possessed such... *ahem* Freudian Intellect (Ba Dumm Chhh).
My bad taste in jokes aside, I can't wait for the next update.
| Deep Sea Anchor chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Funny that Dante should start his monologue and begin discussing god and fate, considering his name (reference to Durante Degli Alighieri, commonly referred to as Dante, and "The Divine Comedy")
I like Aeris's story though. The suicide part was gripping.
Leo's story is even better. Even more emotionally gripping.I also liked the way Leo described most of his emotions. The methods by which he wanted to see his parents murderer die, for instance, were both knowledgeable and amusing.
Overall, I think I have a vague idea where this is headed (though where DJ fits in is still a mystery to me) I look forward to satisfying my curiosity in the next chapter