Reviews for Keeping up with the Malfoys
Guest chapter 11 . 2/5
Please finish this I was reading this on archiveofourown and I saw that you said it was here am I in the wrong place idk what's happening but I wanted to say that I love this story so much your writing is very good
bellaandbeastlove chapter 11 . 11/30/2017
Please, please, please finish the story... it's amazing
Trinity Kouya Hime-sama chapter 11 . 10/29/2017
I do hope someday you decide to finish this story, its really too good of a story to be abandoned. Love it, the story, the characters, everything!
Anon chapter 11 . 9/14/2017
Why havent you finished this story? Its so so good! Please please pleaseeeeeee update it and finish it.
Storystitcher22 chapter 1 . 6/23/2017
Great start! Really interesting premise
saiyan angel blue chapter 11 . 6/21/2017
ARGHHHHHH! please update, love love love this story i have to know what happens next PPLLLLEEEEAAASSSEEE
cloudwatcher daydreamer chapter 4 . 6/20/2017
i'm really loving your story so far, can't wait to see how it turns out.
johfra chapter 11 . 5/23/2017
great story i hope you will be able to finish it
Wtf manchu chapter 5 . 4/30/2017
Manchu is not a Chinese name. It's a racist character made up by Hollywood. Imagine naming a character Cracker just cause they're White. Or redneck. You just don't do it. Edit this piece and pick a real name. Like John. Or Thomas. Or Christopher.
thehpfan123 chapter 11 . 3/24/2017
Amazing work! Incredibly written!
Guest chapter 11 . 12/4/2016
Hiii! Just read this in a few hours, couldn't put it down and I will definitely be returning. PLEASE keep writing, you are absolutely amazing!
keita2061 chapter 11 . 11/15/2016
Hi Vendelin, I just finished reading your story - I'm so impressed by the writing! I was so completely absorbed that I spent any extra moments I had during the day catching up and reading and re-reading my favourite parts! You're so close to finishing and while I know it's been a while since you updated, could you please please work on it and finish it? you're such a fantastic writer and it's really a talent you have there! Please don't leave this story unfinished! I would love to hear more from you and see your work completed! If you need any advice, I'm here if you wish to speak ... although, I admit I myself have seemed to abandon my own fanfic ... but I am also working on it! I hope this has at least made you smile and let you know you're work is terrific and much appreciated but what I really really hope for is an update!
Sunshine and Showers chapter 11 . 9/8/2016
Aaarrghh! Just read this all in one go, not realising it wasn't finished! Love the story, one of the best drarry fics I have read since Bond. If you have any sympathy for us poor readers who are hooked on your amazing words, please finish it! Thank you 3 3 3
Hopeful223 chapter 11 . 7/24/2016
I know it's holding onto to false hope since this five hasn't been updated for years but PLEASE continue it. It's so amazingly well written and I'm dying to know what happens! Xxx
Kartturi chapter 11 . 6/29/2016
Your intro caught my eye immediately, and I liked your story from very begin before I fell in love with it. This is actually second story ever I rewieved. It is that good.

The pace of the story is very good. You control your many characters nicely. The most I like that this is not too dark and filled with anger, however, beeing serious enough for my taste. You also managed to nail Harry. I have noticed that people have difficulties to make him sexy without changing total character.

I was actually afraid how you would manage to write believable Draco. I kind of did not like the fact that he is "one of the women" but with his thoughts about Drew and all it was avoided.

I have to say that you definitely know your sex scenes. Those are very fluent and stand out from basic texts. I was also very impressed about your English! Wouldn't have guessed without your profile (I'm not native speaker either).

I realize it have been years and it can be really hard to pick up this story again. I still hope you will, because this is one of my top 5 favorites from all. I have also red Glued and will maybe continue your other stories as well. So even if would not continue this one, please write something else at least. Your style is very good. I even considered to try to write this review på svenska to engourage you to continue, but let say that my Swedish is little more than rusty for that. I hope you will find your inspiration and time to finish this one or have a fresh start with something else.
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