|Reviews for Subject 17|
| Mad about the Boro chapter 22 . 4/4/2013
Not bad, but there are a few inconsistencies throughout (e.g. at one point you called 16 Alexander rather that Clay; etc.) It's clear that you wrote this between games so it's a bit jumbled. If you intend to continue this, I'd suggest going back and ironing out the wrinkles in the story to make it more consistent with the AC canon.
| Legionary Prime chapter 22 . 11/23/2012
Assassin's Creed III is really good. I think you should either play it or look up walkthroughs on YouTube
| Legionary Prime chapter 21 . 9/28/2012
Wow, you spared Lucy. YES! But, have you played the Revelations DLC about Subject 16 yet?
| Descy chapter 20 . 9/3/2012
Second option, please.
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/13/2012
Neeyope. Clay Kazmerick was 16's real name
| Descy chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Nooo, you can't let her die :( She has to survive :(
I prefer short chapters by the way, simply because short chapters mean less waiting until we get the next update :)
But of course: the more to read the better. But I hate waiting :P
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/10/2012
WHY DOES IT SAY LUCY P.O.V WHEN ITS DESMONDS? -ILLINOIS
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/9/2012
DUDE ITS WARREN VIDIC NOT VIDIC WARREN THAT JUST SOUNDS WRONG -ILLINOIS P.S GET THAT FIXED BEFORE PEOPLE START RAGING
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/30/2012
Omg, they kissed! More, please :D
| ultimateform14 chapter 8 . 6/28/2012
I don't think I noticed this one before... If I did, why the fuck didn't I favorite it? Good story! Especially the characterization of Lucy.
| marianasgirl chapter 15 . 6/12/2012
OMG yay they kissed! Good chapter :3
| Descy chapter 14 . 5/7/2012
Great chapter :) Desmond & Lucy, yeah 3 Please update as soon as possible!
| Descy chapter 13 . 4/19/2012
More, please :D It's starting to get very interesting :D
| marianasgirl chapter 11 . 3/17/2012
Aw Desmond and Lucy :) cute chapter!
| marianasgirl chapter 9 . 2/29/2012
Grrr I hate vidic. Great chapter! :)