Reviews for Subject 17
Mad about the Boro chapter 22 . 4/4/2013
Not bad, but there are a few inconsistencies throughout (e.g. at one point you called 16 Alexander rather that Clay; etc.) It's clear that you wrote this between games so it's a bit jumbled. If you intend to continue this, I'd suggest going back and ironing out the wrinkles in the story to make it more consistent with the AC canon.
Legionary Prime chapter 22 . 11/23/2012
Assassin's Creed III is really good. I think you should either play it or look up walkthroughs on YouTube
Legionary Prime chapter 21 . 9/28/2012
Wow, you spared Lucy. YES! But, have you played the Revelations DLC about Subject 16 yet?
Descy chapter 20 . 9/3/2012
Second option, please.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/13/2012
Neeyope. Clay Kazmerick was 16's real name
Descy chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Nooo, you can't let her die :( She has to survive :(

I prefer short chapters by the way, simply because short chapters mean less waiting until we get the next update :)
But of course: the more to read the better. But I hate waiting :P
Guest chapter 15 . 7/10/2012
WHY DOES IT SAY LUCY P.O.V WHEN ITS DESMONDS? -ILLINOIS
Guest chapter 3 . 7/9/2012
DUDE ITS WARREN VIDIC NOT VIDIC WARREN THAT JUST SOUNDS WRONG -ILLINOIS P.S GET THAT FIXED BEFORE PEOPLE START RAGING
Guest chapter 16 . 6/30/2012
Omg, they kissed! More, please :D
ultimateform14 chapter 8 . 6/28/2012
I don't think I noticed this one before... If I did, why the fuck didn't I favorite it? Good story! Especially the characterization of Lucy.
marianasgirl chapter 15 . 6/12/2012
OMG yay they kissed! Good chapter :3
Descy chapter 14 . 5/7/2012
Great chapter :) Desmond & Lucy, yeah 3 Please update as soon as possible!
Descy chapter 13 . 4/19/2012
More, please :D It's starting to get very interesting :D
marianasgirl chapter 11 . 3/17/2012
Aw Desmond and Lucy :) cute chapter!
marianasgirl chapter 9 . 2/29/2012
Grrr I hate vidic. Great chapter! :)
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