Reviews for The One That Got Away
Duchess K chapter 16 . 12/1/2013
Damn this! WAAAAA! YOU MADE ME CRYYYYYY. Nevertheless this is good, damn too GOOD! Best SasukexOC fics I've read so far. :D Hope to see more from you :D :D
ChippyUchiha chapter 15 . 3/18/2012


I leave this story for like, a month and he DIIIIIIIIIES! D:

The story was a great story, but I feel like it wasn't long enough, you know? :p bUT AYWAYS, YOU'RE WRITING WAS GREAT AND IT WAS AN OVERALL GOOD STORY. :)

And, my bad. I don't feel like fixing the CAPS mistake. ;p So, please ignore that.
Kishara-Hime chapter 16 . 3/4/2012
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT! You made me crrryyyy! It shouldve been labeled tragedy... It was a good story I guess... but I think you should put it on fictionpress and changed sasuke's name because it wasnt really sasuke at all...
Kishara-Hime chapter 5 . 3/4/2012
Awwww Sasuke seems adorable in this story! How he panicked about the chocolate chips. gyuuuu so kawaii...
Akatsuki's Bitch chapter 16 . 2/25/2012
Oh God .. It's so sad , it's so written wel . The last two chapters were really sad. It's making me emotional , really close to crying. It makes me wanna watch titanic and cry my heart out. I really love this story. If you ever make another SasukexOC or any naruto character story or something like that. Feel free to let me know (:

SinDRegrets911 chapter 16 . 2/24/2012
It was a decent ending. Satisfying, but sady I found nothing that really stood out as a unique impression. Still, very satisfying story. I felt Itachi's appearance in the last chapter was uncalled for, but it did bring your story full circle. Congratulations on finishing your series. Thank you.

Lun3rClockwork chapter 16 . 2/21/2012
Its so sad! but so cute! i loved it!
jelly-bae chapter 16 . 2/21/2012
...I'm in full fledged tears right now. The end caught me especially, as if I wasn't crying enough during the middle already. It was sad but I loved it. Very non-fictional lol

Can't wait to read another great creation
jelly-bae chapter 15 . 2/20/2012
HeirxxOfxxMerlin chapter 15 . 2/19/2012
Awwwwww for a seconding thought he was going to live )':

Bit overall, it was such a good story!
Grey Distortion chapter 15 . 2/19/2012
awwwwww, how sad :(
Pinaychik13 chapter 15 . 2/19/2012
MY EMOTIONS! All the creys T-T

Sasuke! How could you die? You were gonna be a daddy!
Tsukiyomi-Komorebi chapter 15 . 2/18/2012
... Sasuke... Died?

I saw it comming halfway through the chapter. I was like "hey, Sasuke could die and that would make a very original, non predictable ending! But people usually kill the oc's, not the canon guy, so... Nah" and there he goes. Dead.

I feel so sorry about him, how his life was not much more than misery and he died just when it got better... And he never got to even know he was going to be a father... And Sayuri... Raising her child, Sasuke's child, alone... It was so sad!

I kind of feel sorry for Itachi, yet kind of not. I mean, he's always been one of my top three favorite Naruto characters and his life sucked... So I hate to see him suffer more. Yet this fit so well... And he kind of deserved it. I mean, he did abandon Sasuke. Ahh, can't wait for the prologue and see what new stories you'll post.

It was a sad, yet good, ending. Not the average "and they lived happily ever after" fluff. Sad, yet very convincing. I loved it. I'll put it on my list to read it again someday. And I'll be waiting for some new stuff from you, you are a good writer, good luck ;)
Lun3rClockwork chapter 15 . 2/18/2012
You killed sasuke! Why! How could you!
TearsOfMyBlood chapter 15 . 2/18/2012
Oh my! Not expecting that! I never cry with stories, but this one made me want to. That's so sad. Especially when the first time Sasuke came back, so you gave a sense of hope to the reader. However, then Sasuke didn't wake up anymore. It crushed my heart twice as hard.

Although it was a sad ending, this was a GREAT story. Wonderfully written, especially the last chapter.

I hope you make another fanfic this good.

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