Reviews for Mystery Of Life
gothchick456 chapter 2 . 9/19/2009
you need to write more it is to good to not make you write more?.
Emina chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
I liked your story but you need to be more clearer in the text and separate your thoughts better.
SilverStar of Moonclan chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
how sad was ur life? good story, a little confusing.
wheepingroseofsorrow chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Hey for a work of fiction this is pretty good i liked your use of fantsey of the guy who saved her but in the end you almost think he is a work of the girls imaganation. I love how you put the gir's suicede or almost suicied into the girl's perstpective

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DaggerPen chapter 2 . 8/10/2005
Ehh, your story is like many stories I've read: the potential is there, but it's too fast paced, and has some grammatical errors. "I was going to suicide to jump off this building to land on the ground of this cruel earth."? Just a little typo. Nonetheless, if you stop to add details, and fix the errors, this could be a good story. Do you have a beta?
Foxy Heart chapter 2 . 6/6/2004
You need to write some more!
Foxy Heart chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
You have a good suspense!
Somebody chapter 2 . 4/12/2003
It was ok
goove chapter 1 . 11/8/2002
hi your story is good kid but keep on writing you are really talented. i am a 51 year old kid.i really loved your story. I rtealy am impreesed. well got to run kido
Katie chapter 1 . 8/17/2002
wow that was a great story i love it but the one part i did not like was the killing part but other then that it was really good! well i hope you wirte more storts c ya