|Reviews for The Hunt For Cardinal Bird|
| Supiroar chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
How about replacing the names of the bird names Red ,Yellow will become Chuck,Blue birds Blues,Black bird Bomb,Big brother bird Terrence,White bird Matilda but I think then you should make another one as the story might be different
| Giremo chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
It was I was reading the the first one and when it got 2 days right now I try to find another novel and accidentally find this and I was happy reading this and I love this very I finished reading I thought about what happened next because you just end without saying what happened to the pig but still I really like your storyline
| LADY NINJA chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
y not make a romantic story about female red bird & red bird...aloooone?
| ObsessedwithBirds chapter 14 . 1/19/2012
Loved it! Thank you for such an awesome story! :D
| ObsessedwithBirds chapter 4 . 1/16/2012
This is freaking amazing...
| KiKey chapter 14 . 12/17/2011
Wait a sec, what has happened to the pigs plan of eating Birds? That dissapeared completely from the story...
| KiKey chapter 14 . 12/17/2011
I have an idea! Don't know if you will like it, but I would like to tell you this idea. If it's good, you can use it.
What if a human finds Red while he is alone in the forest? Don't know what will happen then, anything can happen, like he is going to be researched or taken as a 'pet'. If you like it, you can use this idea ;) Your choice!
| KiKey chapter 14 . 12/15/2011
Amazing, realy amazing :) Oh oh, Red Bird, you always get in problems! Well then, this was a great story.
| KiKey chapter 13 . 12/12/2011
ö Suspense... Oh my god... I'm waiting for the next chapter. I saw a typo at the word Them, there was written Tehm.
DON'T DIE RED!
| KiKey chapter 12 . 12/10/2011
Oh my... Hm, when you upload a chapter it must be midday, somewhere around five o'clock, maybe? Well, when you upload a chapter, over here where I live its somewhere around five o'clock in the morning. Does that mean you live near New Zealand? Ah well, nice chapter again. Its almost Christmas over here, over there too? If so, Merry Christmas ;)
| KiKey chapter 11 . 12/9/2011
Great chapter! Good thing Red is finally home, but the chicks...
| KiKey chapter 10 . 12/8/2011
Amazing chapter :) Again, got no much words for this
Well then, I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter ( or at least I'm trying to ;) )
| KiKey chapter 9 . 12/6/2011
"Hey guys," said one of the blue birds, "Do you smell something?"
The Red Baron took a good whiff, sure enough there was something cooking nearby. "Smells like chicken." he said, then everybody looked at White Bird.
"You joke about me and stared at me for a reaction?" he barked, "Some friends you are."
"They're bird bones," he said, "Chicken bones."
"Now I'm not complaining." grumped White Bird.
LOL, liked that one with White Bird.
OH MY GOD HE HAS THE CHICKS OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD NEXT CHAPTER! :o
| KiKey chapter 8 . 12/5/2011
I smiled almost the WHOLE chapter! The action was AMAZING, RJ IS amazing! Man, I'm CURIOUS to the NEXT CHAPTER! Lol
| KiKey chapter 7 . 12/3/2011
This was so cool! I smiled when RJ came in, bashing the pigs to the side. First I said Yes, then I said Coo, then I smiled again :D