Reviews for Better
Nay chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Few months later, and I still adore this just as much as I did before. Its so brilliant and one of the best birthday gifts I could imagine. Thank you my love, for writing this.
JJLiberty chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Excellent. I liked the flow and writing style. And of course I enjoyed the last line. Great first slash fic.

[jay-jay]
EmilyLupin77 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Aww, how sweet! This is really good for your first slash, Melly!

I know Nay shall love it when she reads, or loves it if she already read it.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY NAYY! I LOVE YOU, FAIRY!
xNomii chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
OMG SIG! YOU WROTE SLASH! FOR ME! Thank you so much! I was so worried I did something to upset you when you said you wouldn't make me a present, but I absolutely completely utterly adore this. Thank you so, so, SO much!