Reviews for Eyes On Me
KylaHirawani chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Ewww gross
Dulcinea21bella chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
This was really hot!
newborntwifan chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
that was grrreat! well written. hot!
beckey.ledbetter1 chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
good story
marveecorp chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
That was so sexy and hot!
Gillian Aubrey chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
I liked this a lot! Nicely done! :)
sessahhh chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
So good, so hot. Thanks for writing this prompt. It was absolutely the write amount of pervy with just a bit of story. Very yum.
bellawant2be chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
I would like to thank the prompter also! Very hot : ) Thanks for writing!
texasbella chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
holy shit! would love to see this continued...you've established that he likes to share her and this was just so unbelievably hot, would love to see more scenes where he commands her with multiple partners!
Luvtwismut chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
That was incredibly sexy! Well done!
EeWee chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Whew! hot, hot, hot. Awesome little oneshot.
MarchHare5 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
So, so hot. I really enjoyed this! :)
4CullensandaBlack chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Goodness, this was dirty, dark, kinky, filthy, nasty, wrong and OH SO GOOD!
vampireluv101 chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Great Story!
cravingtwilight chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
very nicely done!
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