|Reviews for Lonely Beginning|
| Froyo3 chapter 4 . 4/13/2013
I gotta know what happens next so please please write the next chapter! Please!
| Night-Waker chapter 4 . 12/17/2012
That can't be it! I wanna see Vera get what she deserves and what happens to Alice and Nny!
| Rinita-Chan chapter 3 . 10/23/2012
Thank you so much for your kind review! I love your story! Also: if you have trouble coming up with ideas, you can use stuff from my last chapter of Naraku no Hana. Just be sure to have fun with this! MMR
| Invader Glow chapter 4 . 10/13/2012
This was awesome. My life is like that only I saw my grandparents die in front of my eyes!
| Just a person chapter 4 . 9/22/2012
Really loved this! You should definitely write more chapters. At least it's something original and not completely crappy. :3
| Jem F chapter 4 . 8/28/2012
nice; i like this so far.
| Limphidora chapter 2 . 8/10/2012
I'm gonna cry, just so much emotion. It's not a bad thing, I've read many fanfics lacking emotion. And I congratulate you on making me cry
| Rinita-Chan chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
Awesome. Vera is a bitch, and I hope she gets hit by a semi truck. Poor Johnny, I felt the same after my great Grandma passed away.
| PsYcHoGaMeR164 chapter 3 . 7/27/2012
Uh oh troubles coming.
Hmm but maybe and this is only a opioun that the next time they show up instead of saying Psycho Doughboys full name you just use D-boy cause hes only a shadow now and he doesn't get a body till Nny's in like High Skool or so.
| PsYcHoGaMeR164 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
But I can imagine Johnny being just like Squee before that only his parents actually give a damn about him.
This is really good.
| Shadow the Ranger chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
Fantastic! When is the next chappie coming out?
| Rinita-Chan chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Thank you for your kind review! I also loved your stories too! You have also reinspired me and I am currently drafting this next chapter, so I'll update when I'm back from Florida!
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/2/2012
I really liked this chapter. You have a very smooth way of writing. It flows perfectly. :) I really, really hope that Nny's aunt gets what's coming to her... can't wait for the next upload.
| BAYALE chapter 3 . 7/2/2012
FINALLLY! Oh my GOSH seeing this bloody brilliant thing in my inbox made my entire morning! You have no idea how amazing this was my friend, TRUST ME!
| Jem Fukuyama chapter 2 . 4/25/2012
aww poor johnny! is it bad to think he's just so adorable in this chapter. XP i dont like vera, she ticks me off. but i actually know someone like that.