Reviews for Hybrid Theory Redux
gabelou1991 chapter 5 . 6/24/2015
Guest chapter 5 . 12/30/2014
amazing story
tomorrow4eva chapter 5 . 6/16/2013
Wow, you really go into Gohan's anger issues. He's a berserker. Repress, repress, explode! Very interesting match.
tomorrow4eva chapter 4 . 6/16/2013
I love your fights
tomorrow4eva chapter 3 . 6/16/2013
Yeah, Toriyama used to include all the finalist matches, so I think its fun that you do too. But after Lanfan I thought Chi-chi was a finalist. Enjoying the story and the matches!
Holly of the Night chapter 2 . 6/19/2012
Then to everyones surprise, it was Vegeta who raised the ante even further. "Fifty zenni and one of Bulmas bras says the brat beats him with a dodge and a kick," he added, bringing a mortified expression to Bulma and a lovesick expression to Oolong and Roshi. "Youre on!" Both announced in unison.


It's not a bad story, my only concern is you max different dialogue in one paragraph. Although, this was years ago and you improved since then
Holly of the Night chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Bulma slapping Maste Roshi, love it XD

This whole story is interesting, bringing the Z fighters closer together with others like Zangya
ShadyAristocrat chapter 5 . 7/31/2010
I loved it!
marc chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
You have some great stories. Keep up the good work!
mandeep chapter 5 . 7/12/2008
good fantastic actually, except ,i thought gohan would have won easily like vegeta mentions wen teen gohan was fighting dabura, that if gohan was as strong as he was when he beat cell, then he could have finished him off,.. but ur story isnt complete is it.. sequel perhaps
thegreenpuma88 chapter 5 . 3/8/2004
very good
O' Disgusted One chapter 2 . 1/13/2003
yokai785 chapter 5 . 10/26/2002
i will read the next right away

The Rev chapter 5 . 10/25/2002
Another great chapter in the Hybrid Theory universe. I think this was the best one yet, by far. I liked your writing style when I first read Hybrid Theory, and it's getting better as the saga goes on.

Anyway, there were far too many great moments in the fic to comment on them all, but the bit with Krillin and Juuhachi-gou was absolutely perfect. I could actually see it happening in my mind completely as I read it. Wonderful work.


The Rev.
Professor Authordude chapter 5 . 9/10/2002
Yeah Gohan! Kick that sorry pink b*******'s a** into next Tuesday! *cheers and waves a "Go Gohan!" flag*
35 | Page 1 .. Last Next »