|Reviews for Heart Trouble|
| SeverNSkull chapter 18 . 2/10
I really enjoyed this story. It had all the elements I admire in an episode of Supernatural and one of my favorite pairings, Dean and Castiel. The plot was in a word: remarkable! It was so well-written that I had to suggest it to my friends and even my sweetheart, but he's a straight arrow so that's not happening...
I was completely addicted to your story. I was drawn in by the very first chapter and hook, line, and sinker. You kept all of them in such impeccable character and even though you were worried about your typos, your story is so drawing I overlooked them, hell, anyone would.
I suggest anyone who is a fan of Dean and Castiel, who're just scrolling through the comments to READ THIS! They will not be disappointed. This is one of the handful of remarkably written stories on fanfiction and I would gladly reread it, over and over again!
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/5
Just... yes. Oh my goodness gracious yes. The way you tell of their sexual ventures without being all "and then he put his mouth on the other guy's dick." and made it sweeeeet and fluffy and added a touch of... ah how do I describe it. Soft bitterness? Grey? Shadowy but not? It was wonderful.
I felt like I was peering into their life and witnessing it, but not intruding. Not being a character. Maybe floating nearby and emphasizing, but not being. And the soft-but-aching romance was so REAL even though it ended happily.
A lot of fictions (fanfictions especially) can never pull this sort of thing off. It's always too serious, too soft, too fluffy, too obviously fake-sweet, too out-of-character. You managed it. Dean's denial and reluctant-but-not paradoxial mindset and Castiel's understanding-but-also-really-confused mindset were great! Most people never get Castiel's confusion just right... or he'll get some phrases for no reason and then wonder what the hell that last sentence meant.
This fanfiction left me feeling achy, warm, not-so-bitterly-sweet, saddish, peaceful, moved-and-settled, and much more like I just closed the pages of a wonderfully parchment-scented book than most. Closing it off with a final resolution, knowing that no relationship is perfect and there will still be trouble along the way...
It gave me the willies. Not shivers or tinglies, but more like light dancing prickles every once and a while and a thoughtful mindset that may or may not have me daydreaming/writing about Destiel or other pairings I can imagine as aching-but-in-a-good-saddish-way-sweet.
Thank you for this lovely piece of art, regardless of whether it was a tender work in the making for years or just a story popping up randomly staring at a salad on lunchbreak.
Keep writing, especially if all your work is this good.
S.S. (no account)
| Lheii78 chapter 18 . 1/27
i am just a newly converted destiel shipper.
omg this is just so sweet!
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/21
This is gold. Pure gold and I absolutely love it and CANNOT WAIT to read the rest :D
| Dean chapter 18 . 1/3
OH MY GOD I'M SITTING HERE TRYING NOT TO CRY THAT WAS ASDFGHJKL
I WISH YOU HAD THIS ON AO3 SO I COULD ADD IT TO MY BOOKMARKS
| adey chapter 18 . 12/27/2014
This fanfic was amazing! you have made me very happy :)
| FoxInDocs chapter 18 . 12/21/2014
Argh! so much angsty angst! That was beautiful and perfect! And plot and cases and oc's to boot!
| I Live on a Phantom Planet chapter 8 . 12/22/2014
I feel like I'm watching an episode of this show while I read your story, and you are amazing at getting the commercial breaks (end of your chapters) in the perfect "what will happen next. I must know" spot. So happy it's updated and I get to continue on.
-I Live on a Phantom Planet
| DarkFoxKirin chapter 18 . 12/22/2014
Awwwwe! I loved this sooo much! B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
Okay that was the cutest thing I have ever read
| Orange-Coyote chapter 18 . 12/9/2014
| Orange-Coyote chapter 16 . 12/9/2014
| Pocketmartin chapter 15 . 12/6/2014
okay i have freakin marathon-d this masterpiece and theRE ARE ONLY TWO CHAPTERS LEFT AND YOU JUST RIPPED OUT MY HEART. THIS BETTER NOT KILL ME IN THE LAST FEW CHAPTERS. WITH THE CUP AND THE UGH I JUST NO. YOU LITERALLY (in the complete literal definition of the word) MADE ME ALMOST CRY. OVER A CUP. A CUP GODDAMMIT. I HATE YOU. WHAT THE HELL? i need a moment
| Orange-Coyote chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
This is great.
| Ibelieve24 chapter 18 . 11/30/2014
Really well written. I enjoyed it so much! Thank you.