Reviews for Heart Trouble
Separate Entity chapter 4 . 12/23/2013
I liked Sam’s point of view.
The last scene was great.
Separate Entity chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
I really liked the way you wrote Dean’s thoughts.
STerraFeather chapter 18 . 12/20/2013
DEAR GOD THAT WAS... AMAZING. YOU HAD ME LAUGHING, SIGHING, FANGIRLING, CRYING, AND AAAAAAAAAAAA! I'm sorry, I ship these two so hard, and this is probably one of the best destiel fics i've read so far
Puddle of Goo chapter 17 . 12/14/2013
This chapter was the cutest! First Cas with his adorable attempt at comforting Dean by concluding that Dean 'looked' stronger (haha), and then Dean himself with the ultimate happiness. I'm smiling a lot right now..
Traumaddict chapter 15 . 12/1/2013
So, basically, I'm crying. And this is your fault.

(Translation: Great chapter!)
Traumaddict chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
The interaction between Sam and Dean is so accurate. I can literally hear their voices in my head.
"Dude, seriously?"
"Shut up."
Not to mention, you're a talented writer. So far, so good!
Danibby chapter 18 . 11/19/2013
Wow, this is probably the best fan fiction I've ever read! You managed to perfectly capture everyone's voices quite well and as much as I hate original characters, Ivy wasn't awful. I hope you write many more fan fictions for my own selfish desire. Anywho, You rock and stuff. Rock on.

Dani
xSoliloquy chapter 18 . 11/11/2013
I loved every part of this story, but I especially adore how you wrote Cas. Seriously, NO ONE gets his character right. It's always like the dialogue is there, but they write him like there's nothing going on upstairs. FFS. You though, dear lord you wrote him PERFECT. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Both for your depiction of Cas and for the awesome story that had my ribs aching from laughter numerous times. You rock & this fic rocks.
napoleonsfics chapter 18 . 11/10/2013
*sniffles* that was FUCKING BEAUTIFUL.
AlguienQueAndaPorAhi chapter 18 . 11/8/2013
You made me cry like four different times during the few hours it took me to read this story, you know? And also laugh, and hold my breathe, and shout at the screen like hell. And after all they'd been through, for a minute I thought you were gonna leave Dean heartbroken and Cas oblivious and honestly, I might have punched my favourite pillow if you did, hahaha.
I'm so glad you didn't, and really really happy I found this story! It was absolutely fascinating from the very beginning, I just couldn't stop reading. You're really talented! I'm sure I'll stick for a while, read more of your stuff.
By the way, I think I read one or two small mistakes somewhere in previous chapters but I was a bit too concentrated in the story and forgot to write them down to tell you, sorry. Hope I'll find them again to let you know.
Plunny.Empress chapter 18 . 11/1/2013
This is a truly amazing fic. Extremely well written with smooth flow, zip grammatical errors, characters are so in depth and in character, the mixture of angst and happiness is perfect, the plot is incredibly engaging, and everything just fits as if it was meant to be. I truly, truly love this fic. Amazing job. I truly look forward to what else you have written. Thank you so much for writing, posting, updating, and finishing this fic. You are a truly fantastic writer and I am seriously honored to have read your fic. You may think me weird for saying that, but it does not change it. Once again, thank you. : )
SilverMikazuki chapter 18 . 10/31/2013
I love editing, giving critique and offering my own two cents on a piece... but literally all I can say is that this is perfect.

Literal perfection.
Guest chapter 18 . 10/28/2013
Oh I hope you are happy now... I was crying for the most of the last chapter... But I still love it :)
thelesbro chapter 11 . 10/25/2013
"Sheldon Cooper of heaven."
That line totally killed me
Guest chapter 18 . 10/21/2013
Omg amazing story! You had me shouting at the screen and squirming on the floor! I didn't wanna stop reading so you cost me a hell of a lotta sleep but it was so worth it :) awesome story
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