|Reviews for Burning On|
| H.N.Dots chapter 30 . 3/8
Thank you for updating and have a good day! :D
| AoiKishi chapter 30 . 2/19
yaayyy.. next chap comin'
| Zikarn Krais chapter 30 . 2/17
No offense, but I honestly think things started to go downhill the moment you introduced Luffy and the gang.
We'll see what happens...
Ace losing should be quite interesting indeed. Though I imagine him winning only by unconsciously pulling out Haki would be quite amusing as well.
Either way, let's see how it goes. I'm rooting for Ace not to win though, but hey, I am but one voice of many.
| SoulMore chapter 30 . 2/13
| Chibi-Onee-chan chapter 30 . 2/13
I'm excited for the next update! It seems this will definitely turn out interesting. Keep up the good work :3
| Son Goshen chapter 30 . 2/13
Interesting development of events! I look forward to this Lock and Key :D ... except the entry by Levy bothers me and I wonder if it's similar to canon or not...
| OnePieceFan2 chapter 30 . 2/13
Excellent chapter. It's good to see you back.
The "Lock and Key" challenge looks to be quite interesting with how you have to defeat other contestants in order to free your partner but it could also the other contestants who are in "lock". I have foreboding feeling things are going to south for Fairy Tail and the Strawhats and Minerva's name is written all over it. Blackbeard's presence still worries me. Why is he competing in the Grand Magic Games? Where is his crew currently at? Why is taking orders from a man, who I feel in my opinion, is far, far weaker than him? Blackbeard was powerful enough to defeat CanonAce, who was Whitebeard's 2nd Commander at the time, with the resulting final clash destroying Banaro Island in the process. And now that he can steal Peoples magic with his Yami Yami no Mi, he's become even more Overpowered. I have a terrible feeling that whatever Teach is planning, it's going to be far worse than whatever Ivan or Future Rogue are planning.
Though I am a little confused as to how Rufus is standing up. Is he going to compete? I mean the teams need to have 5 members at a time so is Sabertooth that desperate?
I hope everyone gets through the game well as I can see Minerva taking this chance to do what she did to Lucy to Usopp and Cana. She'll have to deal with Ace, Luffy, and Mira afterwards…
I can't wait for the next chapter!
See Ya! :)
| jomama25 chapter 30 . 2/13
nice job. keep up the good work
| Daxen123 chapter 30 . 2/13
Hm nice suspenseful ending can't wait for the not chapter
| enigma95 chapter 30 . 2/12
aww why change? and the last sentence creep me out
awesome chapter as always! but w/ teach here and he already stole one from a mage how will chaos erupt from here on out now?
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 30 . 2/12
Nice change of pace:)
| enigma95 chapter 18 . 2/9
hahahahahah brotherly rivalry
| enigma95 chapter 16 . 2/9
waoh never expected them to come but hey ts awesome!
| enigma95 chapter 15 . 2/9
hmmm y did it timeskip for 7 years? sorry not really watching the anime but can u care to etll my how did it happen?
| enigma95 chapter 14 . 2/9
? who was that?