Reviews for the shark and the raven
AkasukiAlexis chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
That was beautiful. The perfect way of summoning their relationship. I see fantastic writings starting from here. Keep up the good work!
MeleeRondo chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Okay, okay. Before I begin, I wish to direct you to this line: "Kisame's world had always been shattered."

Just. Ow. My heart. Kisame's "I'm well aware my entire life is one giant lie" in the manga broke my heart, and then coupled with THAT? Sobbing forever, man. Argh ;-;

It is now my favourite line, everrr.

Now that's over with, this is a lovely piece. A little dark, a little sweet; a little funny, a little sad. "Poignant" would be the word for this one.

And unlike most that I've read so far, I can actually read the descriptors for Itachi and Kisame, "raven" and "shark" in a poetic sense (although honestly the "sad shark" part gave me a mood-breaking image xD), so points for that. There are minor errors here and there, like missing punctuation marks and a missing word. Nothing as far as I can see that needs heavy fixing.

Danke for writing this pretty little thing
popo6severushotmaio.com chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
This is so cute xD I love it!