Reviews for The Broken Host
Stefan's Girl chapter 12 . 8/20/2013
Oh my God...Holy heck this story was/is amazing! You have such amazing talent; you've interwoven romance, humor, humility, adventure and action into a beautiful, wondrous story. I am not disappointed at all. Wow.
The progression of the characters/relationships and the plot was timed to perfection, you didn't let me get ahead of the story or get bored at all. I loved how tender and passionate Ian and Jared were. The biggest surprise (and I did pay attention to the pairings) were Kyle and Jaymie. If I thought the Ian/Jared Sex was hot (it totally was) then I was scorched reading/watching (imagery is a strength you possess) the Kyle/Jaymie scenes. I also love Cal. Kudos on the OC!
When Jaymie flirts with Kyle about brat being his pet name? Hilarious! Kyle did a complete 180 and all I have to say is: about damn time! His attitude was grating on my nerves. Seriously? Why can't people just learn to love and accept other's differences? Homophobia is a serious hate crime that I have no patience for. You tackled the issue so well.
Would you ever consider doing a sequel? I would be reading with bated breath.
Thank-you so much for an enjoyable, heartfelt, and sizzling read. I will be rereading this little gem again!
Stefan's Girl chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
I think you are such an innovator. This is the first Ian/Jared fan fic I've found and (This may sound strange, but I have not actually read this story yet, more on that later) I cannot wait to start reading! I just watched The Host and am obsessed with this pairing. I am already confident in your writing abilities to bring this pairing justice. I was wondering if you would consider posting this story on AO3. I would like to use the 'Entire Work' feature and read the entire story on one long page (and without having to wait for the next chapter to load). I would appreciate it if you would consider my request. I will review again after finishing the fic!
Phoenix xxxxx chapter 12 . 6/30/2012
Like I said; everyone will want a sequel now! *lovelovelovelovelove*
Phoenix xxxxx chapter 11 . 6/21/2012
I'm guessing Sharon hurt Wanda? *wild-guess*
Magician Girl Mirani chapter 9 . 4/3/2012
So Doc and his new friend shall be meeting in the next chapter/ Woohoo! I'm looking forward to that! So did you decide to use the second one then? the Sherlock BBC one? From the description it sounds like it. Good choice!

Sorry I don't have time to write a ridiculously long review like I normally do but I liked the chapter and I look forward with great anticipation to the next one! Gppd luck!

MG Mirani
LifeRequiresImagination chapter 9 . 3/31/2012
I adore this stort and am completely in LOVE with the Kyle and Jamie storyline something I would have never thought of on my own. This story is also written rather well. I enjoy updates as I'm sure you enjoy reviews. :)
Phoenix xxxxx chapter 9 . 3/31/2012
Thank you for our sexy times 3 xD
Phoenix xxxxx chapter 6 . 2/22/2012
*Rereads for millionth time*
Magician Girl Mirani chapter 7 . 1/30/2012
Hmm...so I'm allowed to choose what the character looks like? I think I can live with that. I have two ideas and a couple pictures to go along with it although the eyes just need to be changed to green, I'm thinking either deep forest or deep emerald green personally.

Alright here's the first picture. If you want to see more of this particular one then type in "Jack Harkness" into google search. Just remove the spaces and it should work fine.

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The other idea I had is this one. If you want more pictures of him then just type in "Sherlock bbc" into google search. He is amazing, absolutely amazing! In fact they are both amazing. I'm completely in love with the both of them...too bad the first one is actually gay...what a shame. Anyway, age wise I'd say they'd probably be a little younger than Doc but not by much and just because they're younger that probably wouldn't necessarily mean that they would be the dom. I mean I've only read the book once but I get the feeling that Doc wouldn't mind so maybe they'd take turns? That seems like it'd work to me. Anyway here's the other picture. I like them both and I can only imagine how amazing they'd both look with bright green eyes!

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Anyway hope you like the picture! Plus, just to warn you, if you look up Sherlock Sheet in google you'll get a VERY nice image, not to mention what happens if you type it into youtube. In fact...

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Hope you enjoy, I certainly did! Either choice is fine with me.

Good chpater and I look forward to reading more of your work!
Magician Girl Mirani chapter 6 . 1/27/2012
...well I definitely didn't see THAT coming! -is currently wide-eyed- How old is Jamie in this fic again...just wanna be clear on the age thing. What he did to Kyle was pure and utter genius -snickers- Oh I bet the look on his face was proceless. And now comes the internal struggle!

Hmm...I'm not sure who to pair Doc with truth be told. If he wasn't with Jared then I'd say Ian but since that's not a possibility...I've got no clue at the moment. Hmm...Jebb's too old for him and I don't really know the other male characters well enough since I've only read the books once...maybe a male oc soul? That could be interesting ne? If so then can I PLEASE help design the character and his appearance? PLEASE! I love designing characters and I have the perfect image in mine! Well, two images anyway. Look up the names John Barrowman/Jack Harkness(Torchwood) and/or Sherlock Holmes/Benedict Cumberbatch (Sherlock) And yes I know he has the weirdest name but you should see him act...he's absolutely amazing and so is John Barrowman! Trust me, watch one clip of them in Torchwood and Sherlock respectively and you'll be hooked. I know I was. Plus both shows are full of so many references to pairings and such that it's impossible to resist!

Anyway I'll stop rambling now. Good luck with the next chapter and I'm glad you're enjoying my reviews!
Magician Girl Mirani chapter 5 . 1/24/2012
-is currently smirking viceously at Kyle and the other homophobes in the cave- Sreves them right. Maybe once or twice, if he hears one of them mutterin' something' that he finds offensive, or is offensive to Iano adn Jared, he could shoot his rifle at them, JUST missing their ear or something. I bet that'd teach them to keep their mouths shut!

So you thought my last review was long eh? You haven't seen the half of it my friend. When I get into a fanfiction I can ramble for a long time, a VERY long time.

So are there going to be any revelations about the sexuality of any other characters? Personally I always got the feeling that Doc was gay, or at the very least Bisexual. My theory is that, at the point that he and Sharon got together there was no one else in the caves of the male variety that he could be himself with fully and that is why he chose her, feeling that he should conform to the social norms of the group and be with a woman but now that Jared and Ian have spoken out and are publically interacting in such a way (to an ambiguous extent) that indicates that it would be alright for him to show his true feelings then I think he would take that chance.

...wow that was a long ramble. Hope you enjoyed the long review-slash-rant and good luck with the next chapter.
Magician Girl Mirani chapter 4 . 1/10/2012
Wow...that was one VERY descriptive chapter! -is currently wide-eyed.

Figures Kyle'd try'n stir things up in the caves. It can't last forever though. Some may hold a grudge but most of em seem to be acceptin' folks, 'cept for the obviousness of Sharon and Maggie but I'm discounting them cuz honest I can't stand the pair, especially the way Sharon treated Doc. That wasn't right.

Anyway good chapter and I look forward to the next one.
captainmoosen chapter 4 . 1/9/2012
love it! more more more! awesome chapter! is it weird that i was kinda crying at a lemon? lol that was so sweet!
Magician Girl Mirani chapter 3 . 1/2/2012
I'm glad I'm not the only one that saw potention in these two as a couple and I agree that Ian WOULD be the submissive one out of the pair. A good story so far and I look forward very much to reading more of this fanfic. It's a great idea!

Good luck with the next chapter!
Rachel chapter 3 . 12/22/2011
this is so sweet! I am not usually into slash, but this is an exception.
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