Reviews for Unbeating Heart
nemesisswan chapter 1 . 4/16
"baby"? What kind of crude language is this? It this stage Bella would have never been this shameless as she is portrayed in this story.
Harmony chapter 8 . 5/30/2014
Cute. Keep going, you're doing a good job!
AliceCullen0629 chapter 8 . 2/10/2013
update soon
Guest chapter 8 . 11/23/2012
Great update thanks
BeyondSanity12 chapter 8 . 11/22/2012
Great story! You write very well, and I like the plot, so I hope you update soon.
Dixie.f.9 chapter 8 . 11/22/2012
Good story, good twist to the twilight story.
Eh Bien chapter 7 . 7/13/2012
An interesting AU direction, very engrossing and well done. Your use of language is unusual; sometimes poetic, sometimes funny, at times a little weird and peculiar. It keeps things interesting.
I like the way you present the characters.
The one negative comment I can make is that the story is absolutely loaded with typos.
Looking forward to more.
sheeiur22 chapter 7 . 12/30/2011
Great update thanks
beverlie4055 chapter 7 . 12/30/2011
love the chapter
BellaMarieSwanCullen97 chapter 7 . 12/30/2011
Nice
BellaMarieSwanCullen97 chapter 6 . 12/19/2011
This is good
sheeiur22 chapter 6 . 12/16/2011
Great update thanks.
IThinkINeededThat chapter 6 . 12/16/2011
This chapter seemed all over the place...

And Alice... Seriously? You need to pipe down - you have a newborn!
sandy4321 chapter 6 . 12/16/2011
I just started reading your story and I love it!
BellaMarieSwanCullen97 chapter 5 . 12/15/2011
Nice
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