|Reviews for Unreasonable Reason|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
| Spiral Reflection chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
| Critiquer 4 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
This fanfiction I felt was alot better formatted, and a bit more believable than most of the other LucyLoke fanfictions I have crossed.
However, Loke did seem a little more high strung than I generally identify him to be after he was accepted back into the spirit world. Additionally, I will earnestly suggest you proofread your fanfic for grammatical errors and proper structure. That sad truth is a little bit of grammatical error can severely impair the experience for the reader.
Otherwise it was very well written, I really liked the way Lucy's thought process was broken down. Very believable.
| Lemonsnaps chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Ok, I can't hop but say it. This was sooo cute! Adorable! A fantastic oneshot!
| PoeticNonsenseNinjaStyle chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
waaaaaa i loved this! 'fangirl scream' i loved it!
| Rhov chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Awww, love it! Made me laugh and sigh happily. Perhaps every girl who has dated has had the "staring at the phone" moment. Counting "Aries" was brilliant.