Reviews for A Guilty Heart To Hold
HihiSherLit chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
This poem wasn't bad... But it wasnt the "wonderful" poem I was promised... I bit disappointing, to say the truth. Your poem reminded me of the kind of poems sixth graders write. Rhyming, having a pattern, and predictable. This poem wasn't so great, but it wasn't really bad either.
bwaaaaaa chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Your poem is great! The style of the poem is eloquent and melodic, however it still manages to show you the darkness of war. Great Job!
littlebabylizzy chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
wait what chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
this is a pretty terrible poem. no offense. it's basically a summary of the iliad in "poem" form. a real poem goes deeper than summary. try again.
BelaLorelei chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
You were right... This poem is great! :)