Reviews for Ate My Heart
Guest chapter 3 . 6/7/2019
That was wonderful. It was how I pictured the two of them. One giving and taking whatever is put on him sexually and mentally. And the other protecting and possessing. This story was scary and adorable at the same time. I loved it. Keep writing.
tweetynumair chapter 3 . 2/18/2018
I love how your stories always capture the characters to a T... I can totally see Asami putting Akihito in a cock cage like that!
Deadlycake chapter 3 . 1/20/2017
A good read
Kitty in the Box chapter 3 . 1/19/2017
oh wow that was so amazing and hot. you could really realize how much Asami actually conceals from Akihiko and to what lengths he goes protectig him.
No.just no chapter 2 . 12/19/2015
Sorry, but I don't like this. This story feels like a cheap imitation from Business as Usual. I really really don't like it. It even digust me.
loveroftheyaoi chapter 3 . 5/30/2014
"He would give him everything, anything, even the illusion of freedom that he needed."
It's so powerful and reveals his inner-most feelings and leaves it hanging in the air. I cannot begin to tell you how much I love that line. you are amazing.

it was very intriguing to have a look inside of Asami's head, and I love all the darkness he brings and the actions he must make in order to protect himself, his men and employees, and especially Akihito.

"Sometimes, I wonder if he has any survival instincts." I laughed at this and completely agree with Asami; Akihito has got to be more suspicious of others even if he was in a club Asami owns with lots of people to guard and watch him (ω;). The conversation Asami had with Kirishima about it was just as good and amusing.

mmm absolutely love the the way you write how Akihito and Asami turn each other on (Asami probably knowing more than Akihito) ;P

aaww that's it? but i want more ahaha
thank you for sharing ! hope you have wonderful days and more stories to share! whether they're original works, other couples, and I would never say no to more Finder with Asami and Akihito! :D
loveroftheyaoi chapter 2 . 5/30/2014
aaaww w that ending

you write their sex so beautifully and so sinfully sexy!
this is so enjoyable and impossible to not love!
pssh, like those two could ever be hated! haha how are they so darn awesome?
i've always loved the dynamic and nature of their relationship and your story gives me what i want and lots more.
thank you so much for sharing this!
loveroftheyaoi chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
oooh oh god that was hot! hhaahhah XD love it and want more! off to chapter 2!
Handmaiden of Foamy chapter 3 . 1/4/2014
Excuse me while I go fan myself.
bedouin chapter 3 . 12/13/2013
Loved Asami's POV, hope you write more Finder fic as I'm just starting to work through them now ;) Great job!
oresama will gekokujou you chapter 3 . 11/27/2013
f Akihito knew the real truth of what he was, of what he was capable of, Asami had no doubt that he would flee, and with few regrets. But that could never happen. He wouldn't allow it. He would protect Akihito from the world, and from himself.

I love that part. I love the way you tell asami's capabilities and possessiveness. I love your work. I love your story. Brilliant!
Arawynn chapter 3 . 10/11/2013
Whoa...this brought goosebumps while reading. This was so like Asami. He is so far gone in love with Akihito that its just insane! I love this pair so much! Thank you for a great story. It was dark and edgy and full of raw emotion befitting the two main characters of my fav yaoi manga.
Jhaydren chapter 3 . 10/7/2013
sadistic bastard has a heart kept inside.. hahaha! XD
psynekopath chapter 3 . 9/22/2013
*can't write a review because she dies from hotness, sexiness and perfectness of this story* *twitches and shudders*
Guest chapter 3 . 9/22/2013
very beautiful piece!
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