This was amazing. I love how Sherlock talks to John and helps him understand his value, the warm fluffiness in this story is incredible. :) I wish you the best of luck on your writing.

Feel bad tgat to pick john up he pretty much shoved greg down to a dump cop like everyone else even when his not dump at all and hell i think half the cases he could of solved but didnt because he wanted to give sherlock cases to keep him busy.

This was brilliant! I love that Sherlock tells John how he is important to him and how he made him see that he was on the right path to solving the case and would have had he been given more time and that he declared his undying love to him in a Sherlockian manner. I am so glad my Watson, my twin, sent this to me. They were right that I would love it. You're a brilliant writer. Cheers and ta for the wonderful story. I'm sure my Watson and I will read this again and again.

Great story
Thanks for sharing

Thanks for writing and posting. It's appreciated.

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aaw. Perfect. They are the perfect team.

Absolutely perfect! John must feel pretty useless sometimes and you managed to capture Sherlock's need for him without making it soppy. Love it!

What a wonderful break down of why they work. Well done.

That was a beautifully depiction of John and Sherlock's wonderful friendship, thank you!

An enjoyable one-shot.

OH this is good! I love that you show us just how useful John is, and exactly what he does at the crime scene to help Sherlock - even up to being quiet and letting him put it together...
... then his whole processing everything at the end... and finally being able to say what he really thought and Sherlock being able to rise to the occasion and reassure him.

Perfect!

N'awww, I always like Sherlock acknowledging John's value to him, nice one!

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Nicely done. Not overly sweet, still believable, and having sorted through acres of horrific fanfiction, a terrifically refreshing example of decent writing and characterization. Thanks.

Yay friendship!