|Reviews for Forgotten Family|
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/19
Is Forgotten Family a forgotten story? I sure hope not! I'd like to know what happens next, and how they get outta this mess...
| casammy chapter 7 . 6/19/2013
That has happened with the continuation of this history? I want that dean could rescue sam of his grandfather and to recover the soul of the kid !
| AMC88 chapter 7 . 2/16/2013
You need to finish this story, the suspense of what's going on is intriguing and thrilling to me! Keep the stories coming!
| ccase13 chapter 7 . 6/9/2012
This is a very interesting alternate season 6. I kind of felt for and liked RoboSam, who was loyal to Dean for a long time, even with no soul.
| T.L. Arens chapter 7 . 5/26/2012
Love the idea of your new villian! Oh yeah, a good challenge for Dean, indeed! Kinda sad what happened to Lisa and Ben but it's inevitable. Dealing with the Winchesters either kills you or gets you killed. Hmm... didn't come out right. Anyway, you almost have Crowley's voice well scripted here. I suggest taking just a little bit of time while watching an episode and write down the dialog. That's always helped me.
Another suggestion I'd like to make: you have a tendency to use "it seemed/seemed to be" a little too often. the phrase weakens your sentences. Keep your events either is or is not-that is "Dull pain seemed to be aching from one end of his overly tired body to the other..." is not as strong as "Dull pain ached from one end of his overly tired body to the other." Sentence are much stronger if you keep the noun-verb relation as close to one another as possible ("he crashed. he burned. she slapped). :) Looking forward to your next chapter!
| Zinfer chapter 7 . 5/20/2012
Oh snap! Things r getting pretty serious!
| SPN Mum chapter 7 . 5/20/2012
Oh. My. Goodness. I don't even have words for this chapter! O.o So much happening, so much BAD...I just can't say anything. Sam! Dean! Bobby! Rufus! Mary tried to help, but Dean didn't take care of the shapeshifter when he should have. I feel like it's too late for the boys now. I wish Gabriel had been brought back, instead of Cas! *cries big, fat tears*
I really hope you don't leave me hanging too long on the next chapter, cause I can't stand leaving off here! lol
| cold kagome chapter 7 . 5/20/2012
poor sammy.. p.p awe i hate that asshole... he should died.. o,p/ aw cas suck.. he never help them/ he just atared... and leave them...when they needy the help more then ever.. p.p
| Ginnylove9990 chapter 7 . 5/20/2012
No No No. Just as it was getting to the awesomw part you end the chapter. You are good. You know how to keep the reader coming back to this story. This is and awesome chapter.
As for your questions.I do not know Castiels plans. As for Crowley telling the truth. I have a feeling that he is. I do not understanding why I kinda believe he is telling the truth.
I would love to know why people who watch Supernatural and read fanfictoin why they believe that Crowley still has some good in him. I believe that just maybe he is going help the boys kill the new demon. Now I for one would love to see that happen. And I would love to see another update. But the is no rush.
As for the connection to Dean is a good thing. Well got to go. But one more thing. Let Sam, Dean, And Cas survive. Just please let Sam get sick so Dean can take care of him. And then after Sam is better. Have Dean go after the hunter that hurt sam. Please keep up the great work and please update when you can.
| Lisa chapter 7 . 5/20/2012
Very cool! Hopefully there's more to come? :)
| SPN Mum chapter 6 . 5/15/2012
So happy to see you back continuing this story! :D
Sam has a lot to deal with. I just hope he's up to it. Samuel is such a sleaze! If Mary came back, she wouldn't want anything to do with him, I'm sure! Does he really think she wouldn't care about how he's treating her sons? That seems a lot insane to me. Dean wasn't in any condition to go 'save' Lisa and Ben, but he went anyways, and now he is going to be tortured and killed by Lisa. Sam is going to be taken back to 're-train', but I just hope he can hold out against their drugs and brainwashing.
I can't wait to read more! This story is awesome!
| Zinfer chapter 6 . 5/14/2012
id almost forgotten this fic. good stuff :) update soon
| Ginnylove9990 chapter 6 . 5/14/2012
Oh Man. I am so about your Mother. You and your family are in my prayers.
Great chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter. Please update soon.
| cold kagome chapter 6 . 5/14/2012
poor boys... p.p awwwe now im worry fro them... acan't wait too see what happen next..
| casammy chapter 5 . 1/21/2012
I believe that castiel can be saved if it helps dean and sam in opposition to crowley and samuel, but in these moments, it seems more that impossible and of all forms, I like more when they are dean and sam against all and everything and nobody more, I believe that it goes to be good that dean recovers and of kicks in the ass to castiel, samuel and all those that dared to put the hands on sammy