Reviews for Hakai Suru: Book one
Silvara again chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Aaaand, forget what I said about the translation part. I dunno what happend; must have been blind at the moment.

Anyway, indeed you translated all the words.

Now it doesn't totally make up for the Japanese problem: it doesn't has its place in this fic.

Either warn reader that the story is half Japanese in the summary, or write it all in Japanese, I don't know.
Silvara chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
What the hell is that text? Choose a language! Acutally, you said this was in English, so at least, translate the wapanese for English speaking people if you can't simply throw it out.
PinkSamurai007 chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
It would be allot nicer if the words would all be in english to avoid confusion. Thank you