Reviews for Bolt:The Unforgettable Journey
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
I think the last 2 paragraphs don't make sense why would he talk about the kids if they weren't born yet.
I'm a Jesus Freak chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
I think you passed the week that you were supposed to answer the questions.
Mike101 chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Well since cloudsword supports you, I'm defidently going to support you. Me and cloudswords are friends on here. The story and idea are good. The idea of telling a story in flashback form is a change of the normal to read. Remember to have fun with this or writing it will become a chore and not a joy.
cloudsword chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Nice opening, but you have to remember what you already wrote. Remember, the kids in your story don't exist yet, why not have Penny come back home with a couple of friends in the beginning. It's a good way to start your first Bolt story. Just remember to make it your own and you will go far with this one. Just a little something lot's of other readers told my brother, make your chapters longer, people like it when they stay hooked for a good amount of time. Keep up the good work my friend. Gotta Mosey.