|Reviews for The Smiling Monster|
| jugar38 chapter 10 . 3/21
aahhhhhhhhhhhhh! please write more chapters for this story, also please at some point have miya learn about karasuba being his sekirei and then have miya go on a murder spree and kill all of the other sekire and live happily ever after with minato please and thank you
| Axcel chapter 4 . 2/2
It would be interesting if Minato's strength of will when doing the right thing (which we see often in the manga) overrides Karasuba and subordinates her to him. She'd probably get off on it.
| Axcel chapter 3 . 2/2
From what I recall, wasn't Takehito killed in an accident in the MBI labs and that event prompted Miya to flee with Seo's help? Their escape also enabled several other Sekirei to escape. Takehito and Miya didn't have an intimate relationship, she was just so...messed up in the head that she figured that a man and a woman doing things together (the adjustments and experiments) was what husbands and wives do. I doubt she really knew what marriage was until after her escape. So, why do authors act like they were an actual couple? She respected him and he was her emotional/psychological anchor.
| Madgormley chapter 10 . 1/15
Excellent story so far keep the updates coming
| ethan.lukkar chapter 10 . 1/11
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.
| Lord Sigfry chapter 7 . 12/22/2014
Ah, thar she goes.
| Lord Sigfry chapter 2 . 12/22/2014
Ramen is delicious, whatchu talkin' 'bout woman?!
Also, where is Matsu? No.2?
| MalevolentDarkness16 chapter 10 . 10/20/2014
This chapter is outstanding! I've read your other chapters and I absolutely love this story. I love everything you've done and it is simply fantastic! Please keep updating; I must read more!
| Sandaime Hokage chapter 10 . 10/19/2014
Really enjoying this fic so far, looking forward to seeing where you go next with this
| kageofdoom chapter 10 . 9/25/2014
Hey bro discovered your story just today hope u will continue to update this story and looking forward to it because i think this fic is great.
| SpecH82 chapter 10 . 9/8/2014
So I'm gonna follow this, because I'm interested in seeing what will happen in the end with Karasuba!
Oh and the fact that I think Minato is a weak person, sometimes you just have to risk your life, not just give into everything!
| SpecH82 chapter 8 . 9/8/2014
Weak willed idiot, letting them play him like fools! Tsch
| SpecH82 chapter 5 . 9/8/2014
Karasuba huh, poor poor man, since she seems as nuts in your story as in the anime/manga, I fell sorry for him!
| SpecH82 chapter 3 . 9/8/2014
Kazehana is the best
| Emeraldfireblade chapter 10 . 9/7/2014
Well, you've certainly earned your M rating. Looks like Minato 's V card is official Doomed, lol .
Looking forward to you r next chapter,
Guardian of the Sacred Emerald Flames