|Reviews for The Smiling Monster|
| vienx.001 chapter 9 . 3/3
wow the story is well written and very good..
but... the negative is...
it isnt complete...
hope you will continue n finish this..
thanks the story
| moneygreen932 chapter 9 . 1/28
Damn this story is good and i finished up the chapters just when things were getting interesting too...dammit! hopefully there are more chapters to it... can't wait to see what other changes you make to the original and what Miya and Kazehana will think about Karasuba being one of Minato Sekirei's... and even what other sekirei's Minato will end up with hopefully we get to see him long term with Uzume since you can write her well... and see how Miya reacts and deals with all the other lovers Minato has...(if he has any or Miya and Kazehana scare them off or something... well maybe Miya Kazehana seems to like sharing)
| ThePhenakism chapter 9 . 1/12
Awesome story can't wait for more.
| ArmorOfGeddon chapter 9 . 11/4/2013
I'm not so sure about this latest chapter. Everything from here on basically depends on Minato being an idiot and inexplicably not mentioning Karasuba to the Sekirei he just winged. Feels too forced. Like he's been handed the Idiot Ball just to keep everything secret.
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/30/2013
Please update again soon!
| sl0bad chapter 9 . 10/1/2013
Excellent story, from chapter to chapter the plot is developing nicely, looking forward to see more of Your work.
| No. 00 chapter 9 . 8/12/2013
Read all the chapters and loved it. Great job.
| DraXXter chapter 9 . 8/3/2013
Absolutely awesome! I mean, this story is so gripping and I couldn't stop reading it. I'm eagerly waiting for more!
| FenrirCrinos chapter 9 . 8/1/2013
whoo men, i need know miya's reaction too ALL
karasuba was enjoy it :P
| Biblio388 chapter 9 . 7/31/2013
Really enjoy reading this fic. Like the story so far and hope to keep reading it.
| A simple fool chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
This story is why I scour the Sekirei archives.
| DBZFTW chapter 9 . 7/26/2013
Enjoyed the chapter!
| Zexs chapter 9 . 7/26/2013
This is so going to blow up in his face and it shall be glorious..
| Emeraldfireblade chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
Great chapter, I loved all the personal dialogue. Minato's dreams were definitely getting steamy, I wonder if that was just because of who Kazehanna is, or if he's going to have a similar experience with all his potential Seikirei. I hope that Minato and Miya get closer, the jealousy in the air is practically think enough to cut with a knife.
I'm wondering if Minato will ever be able to have any influence over Karasuba, and I'm curious to see how see reacts to Minato winging another seikeri, as she strikes me as the jealous type, considering that the bad-blood between her and Miya was mostly over a man. ("He's my toy, and you only get to play with him if I say so", or something to that effect).
It's great to see you updating so quickly, one of the reasons that I like your fic so much is your ability to write girls flirting. I know that this sounds kind of stupid, but you'd be amazed at the staggering number of fanfic authors who clearly can't, and it makes your dialogue, oh-so-much-better.
Looking forward to the next chapter, I imagine that at this point in the story you have many avenues that you could explore, I'm curious which option you choice. If you ever feel the need to get another's opinion on a plot idea, feel free to pm me.
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| kaazmiz chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
Eagerly awaits the next instalment