Reviews for Kagamis unlucky star
Z4 chapter 13 . 4/8/2012
My mind just exploded.

I don't think there is even a canon explanation for Miyuki's dad. Usually people say rich business-man. I like this version better. Keep it up!

Z4 out.
Z4 chapter 12 . 3/18/2012
Your grammar is improving, I can see that. I just read this through out of curiousity. It's a unique take on Lucky Star, to be sure. But one thing was really irking me. It's Nevada, not Navada. Other than that, there is sometimes words missing, but can still be understood plenty easily. Kudos to you sir, seeing as English is a BITCH to learn.

Z4 out.
Arkytal chapter 9 . 1/22/2012
Sebzz! 1It's a me, smilodon975! Anyways, I'd love to beta for you man. I have nothing better to do now that I'm done working for a while.

Chapter 8: LOL Terminator Tsukasa. You kind of have to do that now that the image is in my head. xD

Chapter 9: Miyuki Commando ninja? KNEW IT. Dmitri is a cold mofo. They're heading for Groom Lake, aka Area 51, correct? Alien encounters of a Sargent Frog kind should occur. :P
Arkytal chapter 6 . 12/24/2011
You managed to blow up a major city, 2 of the largest navies in the world, kill off multiple LS characters, and rape another, all within 6K words. Damn. I'm gonna have to try harder to beat that level of crazy. I think it's hilarious to

be honest. I reccomend more napalm for your next foray into insanity-I mean chapter. :3

Auf wiedersehn!

Otaku4life chapter 6 . 12/23/2011
I...I cant read this anymore

Just no
Otaku4life chapter 6 . 12/23/2011
I...I cant read this anymore

Just no
Arkytal chapter 2 . 12/12/2011
Awwwww, I liked that house. xD

I lol'd at Vladimir Putin. Coolest guy this side of the Ural Mountains.

Blows up LA's shit they have the girls Delta force doesn't fuck around Matsu kicks everyones ass and uses that m60 like he's Rambo.


Yay crack! And explosions!
Arkytal chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
hey hey hey! Only a couple errors this time! under 2002 it says: NINE US F15 fighters are US goverment

I think you meant to say NINE US F15 fighters are shot down. US government...

And under 1990 you missed a space after the comma in the 2nd sentence. Otherwise it's a great improvement! Hope you get done with the short fill in part and get right down to the good stuff.